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Other Things the Road to Hell is Paved With (6/17)

Nov 28, 2007 19:21

Title: Other Things the Road to Hell is Paved With
Pairing: Spike/Dru (sorta), Spike/Buffy
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: torture, rape, and other unpleasant things... but it's just the first few chapters
Summary: The third part of my alternate season six. Spike is taken prisoner by a vampire gang, and held captive by someone he never expected to see again. ( Read more... )

fic: other things

Comments 6

louise39 November 29 2007, 03:24:41 UTC

Buffy took a deep breath. “Drusilla. She… she could have killed me. Was about to. Spike dusted her.”

Buffy let Spike bite her-to help heal him. He slipped into his game face and sank his teeth into her flesh, drinking deeply as her beating heart pounded the blood through her body. She told her friends almost all.

Was Druslla summoning the demons?

eowyn_315 November 29 2007, 14:37:55 UTC

Hmmm... might have been Dru, although Buffy seems doubtful. Guess we'll find out.

basilio_the_cat November 30 2007, 16:38:09 UTC

Great chapter! :)

eowyn_315 November 30 2007, 17:08:48 UTC

Thank you!

brunettepet December 29 2007, 16:36:00 UTC

The emotional and physical intensity of the bite was deliciously described and having Spike stop because he was compromising Buffy's health is going to add another layer of guilt. You did an excelllent job believably easing the tension between them with their joking.

The Magic Box scene was entertaining. Of course Xander wouldn't be okay with the bite, even though Spike saved Buffy's life. I love Buffy standing up to him.

eowyn_315 December 30 2007, 00:50:00 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)