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[eonism]

Some quick angst before I leave for work.

Title: Strung Along the Wire
Rating: Pg13
Pairings: Bennet/Mohinder
Spoilers: Set after 2x09
Summary: “But I want to hear it,” and when Bennet spoke it was as if the icecaps wouldn’t melt. “From you.”

Comments

[neoreulwonhae]

slkjglksfjhkldf.

*ded*

[eonism]

Um, yay? :D

[bachlava]

Nice work. I am really not happy with canon Mohinder right now, despite my happiness that the character/actor will now be going in a very interesting new direction. This is an insightful, sympathetic look at both of them (as much as it can be for Mohinder right now, anyway). Excellent job.

(Can Bennet beat him up in the sequel anyway, though?)

[eonism]

I can definitely see what you're saying about Mohinder, believe me. On one hand, I can appreciate the external circumstances that drove him to do it, but on the other...he still did it. From a writer's standpoint I like the direction this is going to take him, but from a fan standpoint I'm not happy with him at the moment, :B

But I'm glad you liked the fic anyway, all Mo-anger aside.

[trueroyalty]

Very nicely done! It's going to be interesting to watch, isn't it? But, yes, lovely fic. Thank you!
~TR

[eonism]

Yes it will be interesting, :) And no, thank you -- I'm just glad you enjoyed it.

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

This was fantastic. It really reads like an episode; you have the characterizations down so well. I wouldn't be surprised if they had a conversation just like this, pretty much word-for-word. Amazing, amazing job.

(I've really gotta get around to writing this pairing one of these days...XP)

[eonism]

Aw, well thank you, :) I was kind of nervous since the entire fic was dialogue and I'm not really good with fics that are heavy on dialogue. But I decided to just keep writing until I could hear the actors' voices in my head; when I reach that point it's a pretty good indication that I'm going in the right direction.

(And yes, you should, :3 I've been reading the pairing for months but I really didn't get inspired to do anything about them until last week. There needs to be more fic, though. *emo tearz*)

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

I do that with my dialogue all of the time. It works very well, I think.

(Man, I really need to. XD The problem is coming up with an, um. Plot. I'm no good at this shooting angst stuff. ;_;)

[rhea_carlysse]

*_______*

“You were never alone.” The caution in the curl of the words made Mohinder think of sheets and old sweat, but for entirely different reasons. “I told you that.”

*iz ded*

[eonism]

*revives you*

*saves day*

*iz awesome*