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Jun 13, 2007 02:37

More emo, more single parenting, more Peter stumbling around in a field...

Title: On the Other Side of Morning, 2/?
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Mohinder/Peter (eventually)
Spoilers: Everything leading up to 1x23
Summary: Life goes on for those left behind, and begins again for those thought lost.

Chapter Two, A Map of the Modern World. )

heroes, fanfiction, peter/mohinder

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neoreulwonhae June 13 2007, 08:30:39 UTC
sfjhklfdhj! What a cool ending. I wonder where Peter is. Mohinder and Molly is adorable, as always. I just love the domesticness of it. I'd give a better review but it's 1:30 am and I'm dead. :p Fantastic chapter!

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danakszoul June 13 2007, 09:35:32 UTC
Gah! <3 <3 <3. I love everything about this (takes a brief moment to *fangirl* wildly), but I think my favourite detail was Peter's first scene, and the description of how his clothes felt with the extra sensitivity. So much love for that. Little sensory details make me inordinately happy-- I may never have blown up, but I'm crazy sensitive to begin with. I just love that you write with such an attention to those little things.

=^_^=
Anneko

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tracker_lucifer June 13 2007, 12:51:44 UTC
:O I'll play commentary when you come around. But characterization was lovely, Matt was darling. Mohinder was emo-y. Nice job :3

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eonism June 13 2007, 16:32:18 UTC
Of course Mo is emo, :3 This ain't called homodrama for nothing...

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niccy07 June 13 2007, 17:28:03 UTC
Oooh, I am intrigued! I love Molly by the way; her personallity certainly fits her age, and I love the fact that she plays mother-hen to Mohinder's inability to take care of himself. Plus....VERY intrigued about what's happening between Peter and his family. I can't wait to see what happens next!

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niccy07 June 13 2007, 17:44:54 UTC
Just to clarify, is Peter suffering from amnesia? Is that why he doesn't remember where Nathan is or that Nathan actually flew him off?

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eonism June 13 2007, 19:13:34 UTC
Don't worry, it's all explained, :3 I'm still just setting things up in the first three chapters, so, in due time...

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kaycoolx June 13 2007, 21:11:24 UTC
very nice. can't wait for the next update!

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