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[eonism]

I bring the homodrama, oh yes I do...

Title: On the Other Side of Morning, 1/?
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Mohinder/Peter (eventually)
Spoilers: Everything leading up to 1x23
Summary: Two months since the events of "How To Stop An Exploding Man." Some heroes are dead, some are missing, and others are just trying to figure out what to do now.
A/N: An AU

Comments

[tracker_lucifer]

:O.....

Give me a moment. I'll give ya a decent response... Just gotta piece my brain back together.

[tracker_lucifer]

Okay my two cents + a cookie + <3 = Domestic living between Mo and Molly. That was cute but damn, lil girl waking up at 5:28 in the morning? Seriously, even when I was her age my sleeping habits was that bad.

Love how you incorporate lizard!Mo into the story. I miss the darling gay lizard.

Enjoy Mohinder's parts... all of it. How he keep on thinking back on the day, having nightmares and dreams. How Mohinder thought he saw Peter when he continue on with life. Poor man needs a hug and Peter to snuggle.

And Peter... Oh my. Poor darlin' D:

Can't wait for the next chapter. <3

[eonism]

<333

[neoreulwonhae]

OMGOMGOMG! Yay! This is fantastic! I love Mohinder and Molly living together, it's just adorable. I also love the part where Mohinder tries to ignore the news.

YAY PETER! I wonder where he is. And I wonder if Nathan survived...

<3<3<3

[eonism]

Thanks, ^3^

[fool_of_ships]

This makes me happy. Not-necessarily-dead!Petrellis, lizard!Mo, and paternal!Mohinder all in one--congrats. It's good to see some picking up of pieces; I love watching people work through issues. I'd like to know where Peter's ended up, but I can wait.

Lines of cool:

Others he dreamt of maps and ideas like old photographs, spilling out from somewhere else like tumbling rolls of Polaroid film.

Because she knows that smile, the one he gets whenever they talk about that day on the news, and he just squeezes her shoulder, and tells her everything’s going to be okay, even though she already knows it will be.
(Having experienced an adult reassuring me to reassure herself, and having realized at the time that was why she was doing it, this rings very true.)

Also I think I've got to finish one of my H15 pieces pronto before we start getting Parkman-esque feedback. Which I predict won't really be an issue for a chapter or two, and actually isn't that bad a deal anyway, but I thought I should mention it.

'kay bye. ;)

[eonism]

Heh, thanks, :3 I'm not that worried about it, really -- story simularities, if that's what you mean. I have a few things planned that I don't think people will have anticipated, so....

[danakszoul]

Wow. You make words fit together in ways that make me not make words fit together. I kind of just open and close my mouth (which is odd since I don't need it for typing) and then say 'ooh, pretty'.

My favourite line?

'sad/sweet features sewn into white skin grayed like an aged photograph, translucent and wrapped over his slender skeleton in waning strips of cellophane'

Although narrowing it down was no easy task.

Also, the whole design of your page is made of awesome. Figured I'd mention that as long as I was here commenting.

Looking forward to ch.2!
=^_^=
Anneko

[eonism]

Thanks so much, <3

[rainoftruth]

this is beautifully written, I like it very much.

Doesn’t see the spot of light in the sky, darting from nowhere like a comet without a tail, intersecting the mirror’s narrowed field of view with the organic shimmer of an orphaned star as it plummeted towards the earth -- wow.

can't wait for the next chapter :)

[eonism]

Thank you, <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it.