ir vestido de gris 1/5

Jul 26, 2010 06:34

ir vestido de gris 1/5

Losers, comic!verse
pairings: somewhat cougar/jensen. (it's practically canon anywho)
warnings: mostly off screen violence, dirty talk, bad spanish and swearing (like a motherfucker)
summary: At first he figures it's just a sex thing. Only, he's not even sure that they are actually fucking.
Beta'd by the lovely choasangel - ( Read more... )

ir vestido de gris, losers, fanfic

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marvinetta July 25 2010, 22:51:55 UTC
It's interesting to see Cougar/Jensen from an outsider's perspective! Can't wait to read more.

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entwinedangels July 25 2010, 23:03:11 UTC
thankyou!
(although i feel i should warn you that the cougar/jensen feel of the story kind of wanes after this. i dont know what happened, but it kind of got away on me and became all encompassing - so im sorry for that ^^;; )

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entwinedangels July 26 2010, 10:57:50 UTC
thankyou!
writing Clay is actually alot of fun - he's so long suffering, and you can just see that his unit's craziness is slowly seeping in.

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kelly_girl July 26 2010, 02:01:00 UTC
I love how hard Clay thinks about them, like it's a hobby of his. Love his observances of them together and apart. And yes, Jensen's disappearing military record! Fabulous. I really liked this.

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entwinedangels July 26 2010, 10:59:53 UTC
Hee! i love the idea of Clay kind of noticing, and then dwelling on it, while everyone else is just like *shrug* meh.

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damion_starr July 26 2010, 05:57:52 UTC
Absolutely adore this! I love Clay's take on what he sees between Jensen and Cougar, and how he's confused and concerned and just so delightfully *Clay* as he tries to deal with it and define it. I can't wait for more!

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entwinedangels July 26 2010, 11:02:53 UTC
thankyou!
Clay is all about defining things and being driven crazy by his team.
He's actually alot of fun (although that might because i write him like he's always two seconds away from through his hands in the air and shout WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON? I DONT EVEN KNOW!, that edge of craziness is fun to write)

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entwinedangels July 26 2010, 14:40:38 UTC
they really do~ (i should feel bad about it but i keep doing it - guh!)

i kind really adore clay now - it cant be easy, being in charge of the losers.

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