Comments | entropicalia: "Like a cheap hotel sign..."

entropicalia

"Like a cheap hotel sign..."

Aug 30, 2006 11:09

I'm raw, prone, compelled.

Jack rose from the warm-chocolate-fresh-corpse sofa and began to pace the office, leaving trails of clacking aural sunshine in his wake...

( City Bus in C Minor, the fifth movement. )

prose

Comments 6

kittenofwrath August 30 2006, 15:26:08 UTC

Ooo. I like what you added to the ending. Extremely creepy, in a good way.

You're really good at depicting insanity. ;)

entropicalia August 30 2006, 15:27:25 UTC

Hahaha, nice icon.

Thank you! That's actually a great, great compliment, hahaha.

Yeah, I figured what I had before...wasn't enough? This seems to fit better.

kittenofwrath August 30 2006, 15:28:58 UTC

What you added definitely brings the entire chapter together in a much more satisfying way, in my opinion.

Hehe, this icon totally depicts what I'm like in my overwhelmed moods...in a pisces way, of course. [/maniacal laughter]

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Re: Can I please have some more?? entropicalia August 31 2006, 12:34:39 UTC

I'm glad you like it! God, I'd love to adapt for screen.

If you click on the 'prose' tag at the top of this entry, you'll find more. It's also all on my deviantArt page. There's a link in my profile.

Re: Can I please have some more?? anonymous September 1 2006, 19:01:26 UTC

AWESOME TALENT!!!!

Re: Can I please have some more?? therealdirge September 2 2006, 02:30:47 UTC

[quote=entropicalia] God, I'd love to adapt for screen. [/quote]

[img] http://www.themonkees.com/monkees_images/Poster%20Nesmith%20Tapeheads.GIF [/img]

There's only one thing that adds real production value…