Comments | entropicalia: "You comb your hair to hide your lying eyes..."

entropicalia

"You comb your hair to hide your lying eyes..."

Aug 18, 2006 13:55

Sensing her discomfort in the silence that followed his confession, he let go of her and turned his attention gracelessly to the terra cotta ruins surrounding her seated figure. "Where the fuck’s my wedding ring?"

( City Bus in C Minor, the fourth movement. )

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mreraser August 18 2006, 18:03:36 UTC

It would of been better if you had used the word 'alchemy' in there somewhere.

blimpcaptain August 18 2006, 18:45:48 UTC

Personally, the Berenstain Bears reference really lit my fire! :-)

entropicalia August 18 2006, 19:12:19 UTC

blimpcaptain August 18 2006, 20:46:57 UTC

I LOVE THEM!!!

eriss August 18 2006, 19:32:07 UTC

Learn to tag these stories, h0.

kittenofwrath August 21 2006, 00:53:05 UTC

I don't know why, but I didn't realize 'til now that the woman Jack had met on the bus was THE Mona. The Mona he ended up married to. Holy shit...this installation certainly adds a new dimension to things. It's getting more and more interesting! :D