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+ super IMPT follow up +

Jan 08, 2012 22:50

As promised, we've looked over what everyone had to say about the situation, and we've come to a decision. Entranceway will be moving to DreamWidth and it will become a community-based game.Below the cut is the moving schedule, which starts officially on January 13th and ends on January 20th. This gives everyone plenty of time in the interim to set ( Read more... )

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40410 January 9 2012, 05:58:29 UTC

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

40410 January 9 2012, 06:15:27 UTC

...Question: as the roleplay's being all shook up and re-organised and stuff, does that include rewriting the premise? Because at the moment it doesn't really have anything to do with the game.

(I feel like a dick I'm sorry but it's something I've been thinking about for a while)

vitaelamorte January 9 2012, 06:31:58 UTC

That's actually an area we've been working on revamping for awhile. We've just been a little slow with it. ;;;;

40410 January 9 2012, 06:34:20 UTC

OH GOOD OKAY if you guys have had the same idea then I don't feel like a dick for bringing it up. XD

eatsyourscience January 10 2012, 23:09:08 UTC

Is this more to your liking my dear?

40410 January 10 2012, 23:50:50 UTC

I enjoy thisssss. :D ( ... )

eatsyourscience January 11 2012, 02:27:10 UTC

???

40410 January 11 2012, 03:35:22 UTC

Oh gosh awesome. 8D

Thoughts on this:

- The importance given to the 'different worlds, this one kidnaps you' premise seems just about ideal.

- It still doesn't really give an impression of the events. At the moment, the time given to describing the Mirrors vs describing the events makes it seem like the plot revolves around the mirrors, and sets them up as main players, whereas in the roleplaying itself they're optional and tend to just hang out and do their own thing. I would change this paragraph:

This world goes a step further: it builds up another you…

to segue into more event stuff, rather than mirror stuff (which can come afterward):

This world goes a step further: it rebuilds itself around what you know, what you've experienced, what you are. It changes the world around you and the people you talk to, and it can even change you yourself. And every time it does, it steals a piece of your life that you'll never see again.- "what it takes, it uses, drains, reshapes it, and makes it part of itself again" is still pretty vague ( ... )

eatsyourscience January 11 2012, 03:56:07 UTC

You are a beautiful babby, Caz.

40410 January 11 2012, 19:27:41 UTC

NO U.

Also this draft is awesome and I stamp it with my approval. 8D

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