Seeking alpha reader
I could really use an early reader on the story I did (and am still working on) for NaNoWriMo this year. It's pretty damn well put together considering it's a NaNo story. It's something I'm actually comfortable sending out because it's already readable.
I need some extra motivation to get this completed quickly and need feedback on the flow and characterization. The basics of the story:
Fandom: Supernatural
Timeline: Alternate take on most of S5
Focal Characters: Sam, Jo, Crowley
Pairings?: None. This is gen, focused on dynamics between the three focal characters.
Additional important characters: Ellen, Gabriel, Dean, Bobby, Castiel
Current length: ~52K
Rating: On-par with the show itself, with more swearing :p
Premise: Dean and Sam Winchester split ways in the wake of Lucifer's rising. When his last conversation with Dean leaves Sam convinced there's no hope of reconciliation, Sam sets out to find his redemption in stopping Lucifer on his own. Little did he know he would find companionship with an old friend, Jo Harvelle, and the King of the Crossroads during his pursuit.
Previews of several scenes from before I hit the 50k mark can be seen here.
Anyone interested in taking a look and sharing their thoughts? I know almost exactly where I want this story to end. It's a matter of pushing myself to finish the end arc of the plot.
I need some extra motivation to get this completed quickly and need feedback on the flow and characterization. The basics of the story:
Fandom: Supernatural
Timeline: Alternate take on most of S5
Focal Characters: Sam, Jo, Crowley
Pairings?: None. This is gen, focused on dynamics between the three focal characters.
Additional important characters: Ellen, Gabriel, Dean, Bobby, Castiel
Current length: ~52K
Rating: On-par with the show itself, with more swearing :p
Premise: Dean and Sam Winchester split ways in the wake of Lucifer's rising. When his last conversation with Dean leaves Sam convinced there's no hope of reconciliation, Sam sets out to find his redemption in stopping Lucifer on his own. Little did he know he would find companionship with an old friend, Jo Harvelle, and the King of the Crossroads during his pursuit.
Previews of several scenes from before I hit the 50k mark can be seen here.
Anyone interested in taking a look and sharing their thoughts? I know almost exactly where I want this story to end. It's a matter of pushing myself to finish the end arc of the plot.