fanfiction | exo : take my hand and reach towards the light

[enen_chan]

title: take my hand and reach towards the light
genre: angst ;; comfort
pairing(s): chanyeol x baekhyun (mentions of sehun x luhan ;; tao x kris)
word Count: 1060
rating: pg-13
warning: character death

Notes: for aideshou's Challenge o1 with picture prompt © and prompt "retrouvaille - (noun) the joy of meeting or finding someone again after a long

Comments

[nighttimefalls]

And if they look closely enough, they see the grinning faces of their two lost friends, dancing, reunited, in the flames.
crying waylt ;__________;

[enen_chan]

I'm sorrryyyy~~ at least I got something right...? maybe... is making people cry a good thing?
Thanks for reading anyways~~ ^^

[athasshirabu]

Lemme cry and curl into a ball forever ;~;
I should've known that this must be sad and I always avoid character death but idk why I still read it!
LOL
So happy that baekyeol is 'reunite' ;A;
This is beautifully sad, thanks for writing ♥

[enen_chan]

And thank you for reading and commenting~ ♥
I don't even know why I write it, I've never written character death before... :/

And can I just say (slightly irrelevant)... that neck~ *-*

[athasshirabu]

This is your first character death?
you did a good job writing it then :D

Oh? My icon?
say hello to my boyfriend~ *shot* XDDD
That pose keeps killing me, idk why I still use it as my icon. LOL

[enen_chan]

Yeah, I generally try and avoid anything with death usually... Evidently it failed this time... But thanks~ ^^

That pose is killing me too... He has a very yummy neck~~

[envybleedsgreen]

Oh, the last line just broke my heart.

[enen_chan]

Oh, I'm sorry~ *sticks it back together again with duck tape* Better...? =D

[yumi_maki]

Oh wow, no, this is really good. Heart-breaking but beautiful. I love how you incorporated the bonfire here - it's not just a motif or a setting, it has so much meaning. And I think you did a great job with the characterization of everyone - the glimpses of the other members was nice. And the scene with them at school and the song - getting to see that little flash of happiness, it was such a nice touch. Really, I like everything and your writing is so lovely. It's wonderful, honestly. Good job.

[enen_chan]

Awww~~ Thank you so much for this epicly long comment~~ ^^ You're too nice~~~ ♥