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Apr 27, 2004 08:32

this is my letter of recommendation.. i have to write it for adv comp (advanced composition if your slow lmao). this is the first draft (obviously). except that i changed the past tense into present tense where its suppose to be and changed things like 'i think' and such. and like, unworded some wordy sentences lmao. just a few things. iffer revise ( Read more... )

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wonderfulling April 27 2004, 21:18:39 UTC
*i forgot to change that one sentence..

To Whom It May Concern:
If you only hire one person this year, Mrs. Jean Jensen should be your first, and only, choice. I’ve had the pleasure of being one of Mrs. Jensen’s students for two grades: kindergarten and fourth. The reasons Jean Jensen would be the ultimate teacher for your school are unlimited, one cannot sum up all of her great qualities into a single word.

Mrs. Jean Jensen is a unique and caring teacher. On my first day of school, Mrs. Jensen made me feel right at home in her classroom. One way to describe Mrs. Jensen would be knowledgeable. I cannot remember a time where she didn't know an answer to any of the class members various questions. After working for over twenty years as a teacher, Mrs. Jensen knows her way around the classroom. Also, Mrs. Jensen has a great attitude. The smile that is always present on her face allows the whole class warm up to the lesson, and helps the students to better apply themselves. Although Mrs. Jensen isn’t an acctual student, she can communicate with her students with a manner that seems to be at the same age level. Lastly, Mrs. Jensen shows her hardworking skills when she stays after school if any student needs extra help. It’s plain to see why Mrs. Jensen would be a great catch as an employee.

As has been shown, Mrs. Jensen is a fantastic teacher. She is knowledgeable, honorable, hardworking, and patient. She also has a great attitude to boot. In just a few words, Mrs. Jensen is a remarkable teacher, and this company should greatly consider her for a position.

Sincerely,
Tonya Verbraken

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