of iron bars, oxygen & rust 17/?
Title: Of Iron Bars, Oxygen and Rust
Author: endlessduration
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: AU, Romance
Rating: PG
Chapter: 17 // ?
Summary: An iron bar is as strong as it is. But what if oxygen comes in contact and forms rust?
Disclaimer: SM Ent. doesn't own them either (:
Seventeen:
Not for long, our supposedly innocent, tender kiss became hot and needy. I didn’t notice at first but I began to kiss Kibum hungrily. It didn’t take a while for Kibum to respond equally. As we kissed, I started to unbutton the plain white button down shirt he bought earlier from the boutique, and he did the same thing to my chequered button down shirt. When I was done, I slid it off his shoulders but not completely detaching it from his beautiful skin.
I started to nip his lower lip and he opened up for me. I slid my tongue into his sweet, wet cavern. I started to massage every inch of his mouth, making sure not a single part is left untouched and as I did, he moaned in my mouth. His hands slid down to my chest and my lips kissed their way down to Kibum’s jaw line and neck. Kibum threw his head back when my lips came in contact with his warm skin. “Nnnghhhh…”
When my lips found Kibum’s sharp shoulder blades, they started nipping, sucking, licking and biting them, leaving on him my red marks. I smiled at the sight; my marks are on his flawless, milky skin. A whining moan escaped Kibum’s lips and I wanted more, I need to have more of him. I cupped his cheek with a hand and kissed his lips. My tongue, then, intruded his lips making our tongues meet in a battle for dominance. In the end, I won over him.
My hands started to snake down the sides of his torso and into Kibum’s quite loose skinny jeans. I began to undo his jeans, got them off and threw them to the floor along with his boxers. Not after a long while, I snaked my hands to his practically swollen cock. I wrapped my fingers around it and started pumping Kibum’s hardening length. As I was stroking him slowly, he started thrusting up.
I dug my face deep on the crook of his neck. “You like that, honey?” I whispered with hot breaths escaping my lips. I just received a groan as he placed endless kisses on my face. I felt as if he was longing for my lips. Since I knew what he was looking for, I gave my lips to him. The kisses he gave me were all hungry and needy. But I wanted it as much as he does so I responded equally to his needs.
It wasn’t very long till I felt sticky, hot liquid race down my fingers and palm. I pulled away from our hot exchange of kisses and looked down; it was his pre-cum dripping out of his rock hard length. I licked my lips at it. It was so enticing that I ignored his whimpering and moved down to wipe the pre-cum off my hand and his member with my tongue. I darted my tongue out and played with the slit, tasting the salty love juice. I could feel Kibum’s back form an arch as he gave out loud moans because of my teasing.
I thought this would be really weird because that’s how I felt when I watched gay sex in my laptop but I could say that this feels really good, so unlike from what I felt when I watched. I engulfed his twitching length with my mouth in one go, covering every inch completely. His member went down my throat, unintentionally chocking me. But I really liked it… and I could tell Kibum liked it too.
I started to bob my head. I was chocking, dammit, but I didn’t mind. As I was, Kibum started rocking his hips to get deeper into my mouth. How deep do you wanna go? This is the farthest I could go.
Even though it was my first time doing this… ALL OF THESE, I felt as if Kibum was having a really good time and that I was doing it all right. Kibum was getting even harder deep in my throat. The rocking of his hips annoyed my but I could only groan in irritation and grab a firm hold of his hips and keep them steady. With every bob, I could feel him getting near his climax and I don’t want him to. Not just yet.
But at the moment I thought of that, he already reached his climax, exploding inside my mouth like crazy. He screamed as he came. His juice was salty and really good at the same time. The taste was so addicting... And I promised God that I wanted more.
I went up, our faces meeting, except for the part where his eyes were both closed. I kissed his forehead gently, then down till I locked our lips together when his face was resting in my palms. He kissed back. But when I opened my eyes, he was looking at me. And before I knew it, I was pushed away from his body to the edge of the bed.
“Y-you...?” I wasn’t able to ask him clearly. I looked at him; his delicate body was curled up into a ball, letting me think that he’s trying to hide from me. “You don’t like it?” I managed to ask.
His face turned to me for a bit and the hint of reddish pink failed to escape my eyes. “W-w-where the hell did that come from??!” He asked practically shouting as he hugged his knees tightly.
“I... I don’t k-know... really” I scratched my head for a bit, trying to process what I had just done.
Kibum looked away, “That was my first kiss, you know...” He said weakly. “AND YOU STOLE IT! HOW DARE YOU?!”
“THEN WHY DID YOU LET ME STEAL IT?!” I asked as I leaned a bit closer.
“I DIDN’T LET YOU! YOU JUST DID ALL BY YOURSELF!”
“YOU COULD’VE STOPPED ME!”
“WELL I WASN’T ABLE TO!”
“CAN YOU TELL ME WHY?”
“I...”
Then, an awkward silence enveloped them.
“Did you like it when I...” I was unable to finish my question.
“When you what?”
“When I gave you a... blow job...?”
“I...”
“I want more to be honest...” I was looking down, not being able to look up because of the unbearable thing I just did.
“You should go home...” Kibum stated.
“But I don’t want to!”
Kibum only looked at the other in confusion.
“I mean-”
“You should leave.” Kibum got a phone from the side table beside his bed. He dialled some numbers and put it up by his ear. “Jun Young Sae ssi... Can you please prepare a ride for my guest? He’ll be leaving in a matter of minutes. Thank you.” He ended the call and got dressed.
Not after long minutes, Young Sae came to show Jonghyun the door out. He got into the white limo which was prepared for his departure and watch the world beyond the steel barrier he is currently in.
*end of chapter 17*
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a u t h o r 's n o t e :
first of all, everything in this chapter except for the smut part was rushed. i hadn't posted anything in the last couple of days and i'm really sorry about that.
i changed everything in an instant because when my best friend was reading the previous chapters, my other best friend interrupted by saying that she feels that the next chapter will be nc-17. and she was right!
when my friend heard that; the one reading (she knows i'm the writer and the one who interrupted the reading just knew this lunch break), she practically yelled: I HOPE KEY DOESN'T EASILY GIVE IN!!!!
so i kinda changed it.^^
so can you please tell me how my smut was? it's really awkward i tell you!!!! (goes insane)
aish! i've missed writing. school's just really butting in, that's all. i'm not good with studying. lol.
i'm really sorry if this took a really long time >w<;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
i'll try my best to update soon. so don't worry (:
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY TO SUNGMIN AND YOSEOB!!!
♥
d o n ' t f o r g e t
comments, suggestions, requests, rants , etc are loved.
Author: endlessduration
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: AU, Romance
Rating: PG
Chapter: 17 // ?
Summary: An iron bar is as strong as it is. But what if oxygen comes in contact and forms rust?
Disclaimer: SM Ent. doesn't own them either (:
Seventeen:
Not for long, our supposedly innocent, tender kiss became hot and needy. I didn’t notice at first but I began to kiss Kibum hungrily. It didn’t take a while for Kibum to respond equally. As we kissed, I started to unbutton the plain white button down shirt he bought earlier from the boutique, and he did the same thing to my chequered button down shirt. When I was done, I slid it off his shoulders but not completely detaching it from his beautiful skin.
I started to nip his lower lip and he opened up for me. I slid my tongue into his sweet, wet cavern. I started to massage every inch of his mouth, making sure not a single part is left untouched and as I did, he moaned in my mouth. His hands slid down to my chest and my lips kissed their way down to Kibum’s jaw line and neck. Kibum threw his head back when my lips came in contact with his warm skin. “Nnnghhhh…”
When my lips found Kibum’s sharp shoulder blades, they started nipping, sucking, licking and biting them, leaving on him my red marks. I smiled at the sight; my marks are on his flawless, milky skin. A whining moan escaped Kibum’s lips and I wanted more, I need to have more of him. I cupped his cheek with a hand and kissed his lips. My tongue, then, intruded his lips making our tongues meet in a battle for dominance. In the end, I won over him.
My hands started to snake down the sides of his torso and into Kibum’s quite loose skinny jeans. I began to undo his jeans, got them off and threw them to the floor along with his boxers. Not after a long while, I snaked my hands to his practically swollen cock. I wrapped my fingers around it and started pumping Kibum’s hardening length. As I was stroking him slowly, he started thrusting up.
I dug my face deep on the crook of his neck. “You like that, honey?” I whispered with hot breaths escaping my lips. I just received a groan as he placed endless kisses on my face. I felt as if he was longing for my lips. Since I knew what he was looking for, I gave my lips to him. The kisses he gave me were all hungry and needy. But I wanted it as much as he does so I responded equally to his needs.
It wasn’t very long till I felt sticky, hot liquid race down my fingers and palm. I pulled away from our hot exchange of kisses and looked down; it was his pre-cum dripping out of his rock hard length. I licked my lips at it. It was so enticing that I ignored his whimpering and moved down to wipe the pre-cum off my hand and his member with my tongue. I darted my tongue out and played with the slit, tasting the salty love juice. I could feel Kibum’s back form an arch as he gave out loud moans because of my teasing.
I thought this would be really weird because that’s how I felt when I watched gay sex in my laptop but I could say that this feels really good, so unlike from what I felt when I watched. I engulfed his twitching length with my mouth in one go, covering every inch completely. His member went down my throat, unintentionally chocking me. But I really liked it… and I could tell Kibum liked it too.
I started to bob my head. I was chocking, dammit, but I didn’t mind. As I was, Kibum started rocking his hips to get deeper into my mouth. How deep do you wanna go? This is the farthest I could go.
Even though it was my first time doing this… ALL OF THESE, I felt as if Kibum was having a really good time and that I was doing it all right. Kibum was getting even harder deep in my throat. The rocking of his hips annoyed my but I could only groan in irritation and grab a firm hold of his hips and keep them steady. With every bob, I could feel him getting near his climax and I don’t want him to. Not just yet.
But at the moment I thought of that, he already reached his climax, exploding inside my mouth like crazy. He screamed as he came. His juice was salty and really good at the same time. The taste was so addicting... And I promised God that I wanted more.
I went up, our faces meeting, except for the part where his eyes were both closed. I kissed his forehead gently, then down till I locked our lips together when his face was resting in my palms. He kissed back. But when I opened my eyes, he was looking at me. And before I knew it, I was pushed away from his body to the edge of the bed.
“Y-you...?” I wasn’t able to ask him clearly. I looked at him; his delicate body was curled up into a ball, letting me think that he’s trying to hide from me. “You don’t like it?” I managed to ask.
His face turned to me for a bit and the hint of reddish pink failed to escape my eyes. “W-w-where the hell did that come from??!” He asked practically shouting as he hugged his knees tightly.
“I... I don’t k-know... really” I scratched my head for a bit, trying to process what I had just done.
Kibum looked away, “That was my first kiss, you know...” He said weakly. “AND YOU STOLE IT! HOW DARE YOU?!”
“THEN WHY DID YOU LET ME STEAL IT?!” I asked as I leaned a bit closer.
“I DIDN’T LET YOU! YOU JUST DID ALL BY YOURSELF!”
“YOU COULD’VE STOPPED ME!”
“WELL I WASN’T ABLE TO!”
“CAN YOU TELL ME WHY?”
“I...”
Then, an awkward silence enveloped them.
“Did you like it when I...” I was unable to finish my question.
“When you what?”
“When I gave you a... blow job...?”
“I...”
“I want more to be honest...” I was looking down, not being able to look up because of the unbearable thing I just did.
“You should go home...” Kibum stated.
“But I don’t want to!”
Kibum only looked at the other in confusion.
“I mean-”
“You should leave.” Kibum got a phone from the side table beside his bed. He dialled some numbers and put it up by his ear. “Jun Young Sae ssi... Can you please prepare a ride for my guest? He’ll be leaving in a matter of minutes. Thank you.” He ended the call and got dressed.
Not after long minutes, Young Sae came to show Jonghyun the door out. He got into the white limo which was prepared for his departure and watch the world beyond the steel barrier he is currently in.
*end of chapter 17*
[ one | two | three | four | five | six | seven | eight | nine | ten | eleven | twelve | thirteen | fourteen | fifteen | sixteen | seventeen ]
a u t h o r 's n o t e :
first of all, everything in this chapter except for the smut part was rushed. i hadn't posted anything in the last couple of days and i'm really sorry about that.
i changed everything in an instant because when my best friend was reading the previous chapters, my other best friend interrupted by saying that she feels that the next chapter will be nc-17. and she was right!
when my friend heard that; the one reading (she knows i'm the writer and the one who interrupted the reading just knew this lunch break), she practically yelled: I HOPE KEY DOESN'T EASILY GIVE IN!!!!
so i kinda changed it.^^
so can you please tell me how my smut was? it's really awkward i tell you!!!! (goes insane)
aish! i've missed writing. school's just really butting in, that's all. i'm not good with studying. lol.
i'm really sorry if this took a really long time >w<;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
i'll try my best to update soon. so don't worry (:
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY TO SUNGMIN AND YOSEOB!!!
♥
d o n ' t f o r g e t
comments, suggestions, requests, rants , etc are loved.