Top of The World 01/??

[endlessdigital]

I don’t know how I managed to only realize this now. Reita had been pissed since that day. All this time building up in him and he’s exploding now. Simple ideas can lead to complex situation.

I’m crying. Shaking uncontrollably on the cold bathroom floor. It’s the only room in the house with a lock. He hit me and I

Comments

[totchi_san_622]

Oooh...Ruki fantasizes about getting raped? o_o To be honest, I think about that sometimes too. 'Cuz I'd thought it would be interesting to read about it. So it's nice to actually see someone writing about it. XD And I'm glad it's ReitaxRuki. Fantasy came true! XD

[xtatoeba]

Sometimes I do too. But thinking about it and actually doing seem very different to me.

[walkin_siesta]

umm, i'm a bit lost here..
so ruki told rei about his fantasy -> rei fulfilled it -> rei got mad and left -> ruki regretted it -> they made up -> some days later rei explodes and abuse ruki

was that right? i'm sorry, i really didn't get the timeline ^^

[xtatoeba]

Close. It's not some days later, it's actually quite a while later. But the story starts with the end and then goes to the middle before progressing forward. There are flashbacks going back to what happened and things way before that.

[ninja_x33]

intrestin..
very addictin..
i like it. :D
and i like your funny extra spaces.
it makes me anxious to read more.
i thought it was really short.
so i went like "NOUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!"
then i went "oh theres more!~ YEY~"
XDD
well; pleeeeez continue~~ :D

[xtatoeba]

It didn't feel short as I was typing it. I already have the 1st 6 chapters done.

[xtatoeba]

Thanks for reading. I'm hoping the other chapter are less confusing for you. I think they have less going on in them.

[gazerockyo]

ruki as a nypmhomanic...i can see that....i can;t wait to see how they fix this one...more please? o.o

[xtatoeba]

We'll have to wait and see.