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Fic: Slytherin Seduction

Feb 18, 2007 12:31

Title: Slytherin Seduction
Author: enchanted_jae
Pairing: D/H
Rating: NC17
Warning(s): Snark, sex, slash, smut
Word count: 6000
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of JK Rowling, et al. This drabble/fic was written for fun, not for profit.
ADDITIONAL DISCLAIMER: This author is not responsible for underage readers. Please observe the ratings, warnings, and ( Read more... )

content: drunk fic, content: flangst, content: club fic, rating: nc17, gift, content: make up sex, content: foodsmut, content: top!draco, content: reunited, content: jealousy, content: dancing

Comments 47

ladybelz February 18 2007, 18:57:37 UTC

*Pants* Hawt!

And ya know...the whole time I was reading this, I was hearing Justin Timberlake's "SexyBack" in my head lol.

enchanted_jae February 18 2007, 19:06:21 UTC

Thanks! It was a lot of work, this one. However, it wouldn't have taken so long if I hadn't made it my current "write during your down time" project. Shhh, don't tell snottygrrl that.

I really had no song in mind when writing this. I didn't even have a ballad in mind when Harry and Draco danced to that slow song. I thought you all could imagine what you wanted there. Hee!

softly_sweetly February 18 2007, 19:10:38 UTC

Oh wow...The ice-cream bit was great! Those first few times they were talking and trying to bait each other into an argument were very tense and well-written; I was biting my knuckles! Though my favourite part was drunken Harry -

"We're going to have sex," Harry chirped with a bright smile.

#hugs#

enchanted_jae February 18 2007, 19:13:48 UTC

You could almost hear Harry adding a "Wheeeeeeee!" to the end of that line, yeah? *laughs*

Draco seems just the sort to get obscene with his ice cream in order to get what he wants. Heh.

piratesmile331 February 18 2007, 19:20:14 UTC

Hot as hell as always, sweetie. But this is what really got me: "I never stopped loving you," Harry admitted, blushing a little. I had a lump in my throat, too. Lovely.

enchanted_jae February 18 2007, 22:37:13 UTC

And we all know Harry can't tell a lie when he's had a couple drinks. *grins*

piratesmile331 February 18 2007, 23:03:31 UTC

Yes, but it was actually a very sobering admission, especially for Draco.

enchanted_jae February 19 2007, 00:00:16 UTC

I think each admission from Harry made Draco feel a wee bit more like a prat. But it was okay, because Harry loves him anyway. *grins*

anansay February 18 2007, 19:34:00 UTC

Good god! That must be your LONGEST one-shot ever!! Congratulations! :D

I really liked the story, how it took a bit more effort for Draco to finally get Harry.

enchanted_jae February 18 2007, 22:38:47 UTC

Yeah, I guess it is. I wrote CFWM as a single story, but I ended up breaking it into chapters to post.

Harry nearly cut off his nose to spite his face in this one. He still loved Draco, but he was still angry at him, too. Good thing Draco was persistent.

aerisdracoharry February 18 2007, 20:07:58 UTC

This was excellent!! :D

enchanted_jae February 18 2007, 22:39:08 UTC

Thank you!