Comments | enchanted_jae: Spontaneity

enchanted_jae

Spontaneity

Apr 07, 2020 19:10

Title: Spontaneity
Author: enchanted_jae
Characters/Pairing: Neville/Luna
Rating: PG
Word count: 100
Written for: neville100 Prompt No. 431 - Europe
Warnings: Second person pov
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of JK Rowling, et al. This fic/drabble was written for fun, not for profit.
Summary: Neville owes his spontaneity to Luna.

( Spontaneity )

content: second person pov, comm: neville100, rating: pg, content: het, length: 100 word drabble

Comments 11

felaine April 8 2020, 02:24:12 UTC

That is soooo cute and sweet.
Sometimes second person fic feels awkward to me,
but that is perfect for them both.
Good work.

enchanted_jae April 9 2020, 00:06:04 UTC

I agree, and that's why I (almost) never try it! I'm pleased you found it effective here.

ragnarok_08 April 8 2020, 04:48:36 UTC

This was so sweet <3

enchanted_jae April 9 2020, 00:06:14 UTC

Thank you!

sw33tch3rrypi3 April 8 2020, 12:24:07 UTC

Awww! I love a bit of Neville and Luna!
Well done!

enchanted_jae April 9 2020, 00:06:40 UTC

I do, too! I can't believe JKR didn't make them canon.

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enchanted_jae April 9 2020, 00:07:38 UTC

I liked that line, too!

I typically only write fanfic, and the first rule of fanfic is "Thou shalt not profit from fanfic", so...no.

katie_flint April 8 2020, 23:11:16 UTC

"The best souvenir"

Ooo dang this was a good line!! Very cute drabble 😊

enchanted_jae April 9 2020, 00:07:53 UTC

Thanks much!