Possibilities - Part Six

[enchanted_april]

Hello and Happy New Year everyone! It's been a while, but I finally have the next bit of this done... actually it's only part done, but I wanted to post what I have. I think there will be two or three more pages in this part which I hope to finish tomorrow.

Anyone still interested and reading? Let me know what you think :)

Comments

[jovsg]

Naturally, I love this. By now, you know I'm your biggest fan. But this section in particular struck such a cord with me, because it harkened to some other fics you've written. I got that ooey gooey feeling in my heart that "Everybody Lies" and "S&S" gave me when I read and re-read them.

1) Your sense of realism and in-character development of their relationship stuns me. Only in an enchanted_april fic would House buying Cameron sappy flowers and getting gushy over needing her work. And yet it does. It comes at the appropriate points in their relationship, and there's enough of a counterbalance (with Wilson, for example) to help House retain his gruff exterior. In fact, I like that he only gets rid of the outer varnish for Allison.

2) The vacation. Reminded me SO MUCH of their trip to Atlantic City in Saints and Saviors, my favorite section of any fic ever posted on House/Cameron. Another trip in which so much was revealed and their relationship moved to another level. I really enjoyed how you described it, and how you let Allison take in the information about him and not get overly sentimental. Nice work!

3) Ten bucks says she's already pregnant! Can't wait for more.

PS. Did blueheronz talk to you about the interview for the author series? I hope you don't mind if it's moi that shall be interviewing you ;-)! Happy New Year!!!!

[enchanted_april]

SO glad you're still enjoying it, dear :) Blueheronz hasn't emailed me about the interview but I'll be thrilled to have you doing the interviewing! Should be fun!