Comments | emsscraps: Sidestory # 11 +It Only Takes A Moment Part 8: Puppies, Penguins, and Bunnies+

emsscraps

Sidestory # 11 +It Only Takes A Moment Part 8: Puppies, Penguins, and Bunnies+

Jul 07, 2006 13:10

(See SideStory #1 for full Notes and explanation)

A/N: This one was fun.

Disclaimer:: Anyone out there actually think I could make money off this stuff?

Based on Guardian_Kysra's sketch to be found here: Kysra's Puppies, Penguins, and Bunnies

It Only Takes A Moment - Sidestory 11 (From Part VIII)
Games
by Em

( ...and the one with the Monopoly pieces all over them... )

sidestories, writing

Comments 9

blown_lightbulb July 7 2006, 23:46:28 UTC

The only thing that I found disappointing was that it wasn't long enough for the mask to come off. But other than that it was all great. XD

emsscraps July 8 2006, 03:48:00 UTC

Awww...thank you! That's very sweet.

^_^

stillthestars July 8 2006, 01:25:38 UTC

Loved it!

This one flowed really nicely...I could tell you enjoyed writing it. I like when Raven gets all catty and that Robin totally sees right through her defense mechanism.

I'm so sad that there's only one more left!

emsscraps July 8 2006, 03:51:49 UTC

Hee...

It was so much fun...it just came out...popped right out and I couldn't make myself change or add anything to it.

I love it when that happens!

Thanks!

I have fun writing Rob/Rae banter.

Yeah, but I probably won't get to doing that last one for a little while at least...not for any reason other than I want to work on Instinct 2, Chapter 5 next and then work on Sweetest Thing: Last in Line and finally I want to get the next chapter of Burn out before I hibernate for the exam.

Oh, and I've given myself July 24th as the deadline to start posting Estranged as guardian_kysra's birthday present.

So, yeah...don't know when I'm going to get to that one again...although maybe I should add it to the list to do before I hibernate for the exam? That way, I could finish the series before I go take the exam? Hmmm....

rae_valerious July 8 2006, 22:46:29 UTC

That was just great. Their banter was....great! Robin was genius! I was hoping he'd take it off...but, I can't have everything. I love it just the way it is! Definately put this on your list before exams. Gives the whole thing nice closure.

emsscraps July 9 2006, 00:00:12 UTC

THANK YOU! *^_^*

I thought he would take it off too, but as they usually do, Robin had his own ideas and Raven refused to keep playing with him, so *shrug* What can I do?

Yes you're right...it would give it a good sense of closure. hell, it'd give ME a good sense of closure...

*puts it on list*

There we go...it's on.

^_^

rae_valerious July 9 2006, 00:06:12 UTC

Lol, I'm still all tickled from this one. When Robin was inspecting the 'shoe-piece.' I hadn't realized at first what it was. Then Raven cleared her throat....Teehee ^^. I caught it and went back and read it! By any off-chance...Do you know what those words are in the last panel you're going to write about? I can see "Booyah" But, I'm having trouble deciphering the other words....

emsscraps July 9 2006, 00:26:57 UTC

*lol*

I'm glad you caught that! no one else has, I think...at least no one else has said anything to me about catching it.

I do indeed know what the words are, since Kysra sent me a textless version of the drawing (one where she hadn't added Robin's voice over if you will...)

From Raven is: "Hurry UP Beast Boy!!"
From the door (presumably Beast Boy): "Booyah!"

And Kysra told me what she saw with this one was Beast Boy beat her to the bathroom.

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