next poem assignment- free poem

Dec 04, 2006 20:42

Hey I just wrote this for my next assignment...

lemme know what you think of it.

There’s a conflict
Brewing in my brain,
A coffee stain
Soiling my new shirt.
If I open up my heart
Will it hurt?

Another hundred
Million sighs,
Sighed.
Another hundred
Million days
Gone by.

Raindrops fall
In the orange glow
Of the dim streetlight
And shimmer like
Stars against the black
Of the pavement.

I lie here
Chasing dreams
But nothing ever
Turns out as it seems.

Lemme know what you like about. what you don't like. or what could be better.
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