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[emotasticxsteph]

Hello to EVERYONE and yes I mean EVERYONE. I am currently writing a short story (nonfiction/ autobiography) and I desperately need feedback. I'll be posting parts of the story everyday so if you see something you like, dislike, or an error- PLEASE COMMENT. I beg of you! Thank you- and I hope to hear back from you guys. Here we go.

PART ONE:

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Comments

[alkal_ine_tri_o]

Steph that is amazing. Hardcore.
<3

[emotasticxsteph]

Aw, thanks Abs!
<3

[jinxy_]

I agree. I can't believe how well you've written this... its so sad and touching... Very nice job hun.
<3
Jinx.

[emotasticxsteph]

Aw, thanks so much Rache, that comes a lot from someone who has been through as much as you have. I just got done, so I'll be posting the rest within the next few days.
<3

[emotasticxsteph]

Aw, thanks Sara, you are the best. ;)

<3. steph.
ps. I just changed that, thank you!

crazy ass shit homie

[_caulkin]

your writing is getting better and better, you write very unique in the fact that your description is very vivid so you have better understanding of the story. Keep writing, and show others in our class.
Write back G-Unit
Kyle

[doorsirenmj]

steph it's danielle friend me now