Gemma and The Hallway Hands (Part 11 of ?)

[emo_chick_87]

Title: Gemma and The Hallway Hands (Part 11 of

Comments

[fan_fic_adikt]

That part with the Ferris wheel and the stars, had to be the best kiss scene I've ever read!

[emo_chick_87]

Oh thank you. That is so sweet.

[freeiheitpisarz]

This was an awesome chapter. I loved it and all the fluffyness of the carnival.

The last line broke my heart though. Can't wait for the next chapter

[emo_chick_87]

Thanks. I promise I'll fix the breaks.

[sony_kit82]

I'm really glad Kurt waited for his first kiss as well - that was simply perfect. I loved that scene with the fortune teller - I'm torn between thinking, like Kurt, that she's just some cliche gypsy and feeling that there were some sort of foreshadowing. While this was filled with fluff and happy moments, I could not help but feel Kurt's unspoken sadness even before the last part, especially when he thinks of why they have to double date in the first place. I hope things are fixed soon, not only with them but also with Will and Gemma. I liked Gemma's honesty and survivor vibe; she's beyond lying just to have someone she wants think she's perfect. There was confusion in Will but not exactly rebuke so I'm keeping my fingers crossed. :D

[emo_chick_87]

Thank you so much. I'm really happy that the sad resignation came through. I did want to keep it really subtle. I will start to fix them right away. Thanks for saying Gemma comes off as a survivor and not a victim. That was something I was really worried about.

[alicebluegown16]

This whole chapter was just one big reality check for everyone

[emo_chick_87]

Thank you. It was super hard for me to write.

Noah's mom will definitely be in the next chapter and she might not be the problem. *wink wink*.

Unfortunately I think this is a really common response in most straight men. They're is certainly the initial sweet, I could probably get a 3-way going that quickly shifts to feelings of inadequacies.

Finn is about to get a wake up call in a big BAD way.

President Puckerman is an idea that is mad appealing.

[lezi]

I loved the kiss scene. (: I, too, am terrified of heights... I don't know if I'd calm down enough to not bite off the person's tongue, but I'm glad Kurt liked his Ferris wheel kiss. :D

...The fortune teller kind of freaked me out, though. And I want to bash Noah's head in for considering relapsing back into Puck. DON'T DO IT, HUN!

Can't wait for more!

[shamelessbrie]

I second this entire comment!!

Ferris Wheel Kiss for the WIN!!!

[emo_chick_87]

Thanks. And I swear that this is a mini relapse into douchery.