Best Intentions 2/2

Mar 28, 2011 15:43



With nimble fingers, Rachel Berry applied her mascara meticulously while staring deeply into a mirror studded with gold light bulbs.
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cyberninjasio March 28 2011, 20:09:39 UTC
Huzzah! More amazing writing to read! Huzzah! (It's a twofer!)

This was really nice. I like the retelling of Regionals to give it more of a real friendship feel and less of a creepy manipulative thing that the canon has going on. (I honestly don't think the Glee!writers have any idea how to write believable female relationships/interaction... which gives me great fear for Santana, tbh.)

And it's always fun to see someone take on platonic love instead of romantic/sexual love. It's a different dynamic that I enjoy seeing. Thanks for sharing! :)

As always, an inspiration. ;)

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emmelia24 March 30 2011, 02:29:59 UTC
Huzzah! More amazing comments to make me smile :)
Seriously though thank you! You understand that this is a FRIENDSHIP fiction, not romance and enjoyed it! I'm so happy:) Platonic love can sometimes be the most beautiful. I too fear for Santana's plot line in the hands of THREE MEN. Jeese, they need some female writers cough you and me cough cough.
Anyways, thanks so much :)
As always, an inspiration ;)

p.s. Wooah I used a lot of smiley faces haha

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nightcuddler March 28 2011, 20:20:28 UTC
Well done Olivia well done. Full of emotion and I could feel Rachels fears. And then her joy as it built steady upward.

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emmelia24 March 30 2011, 02:32:58 UTC
Thank you so much Jess <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it.

p.s. Twitter ;) Thanks for that as well.

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mjacton March 29 2011, 16:57:02 UTC
I like it! Very hopeful!

What if they hate my song?”

Before Quinn could protest, Rachel lowered her volume, her voice suddenly raw and vulnerable.

“What if they hate me?”

I liked that because I could almost hear her saying that like when she was talking about Shelby ("What if she's terrible...or worse, what if she's better than me?")

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emmelia24 March 30 2011, 02:33:58 UTC
Thank you so much! Don't tell anyone, but my favorite part was that line as well. As confident as Rachel is, I truly see her as a very insecure young girl still finding who she is, finding her place. Thank you so much !!!:)

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