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emmelia24

We Are Going to Make It: Chapter 9/16

Jan 30, 2011 16:04

The bell on the coffee shop door rang as the two girls entered the store.
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sam evans, quinn fabray, faberry, rachel berry, glee

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nightcuddler January 30 2011, 21:33:20 UTC

WOW my good god girl you have once more done it to me. With every word i read my emotions slowly built up to both excitement and anticipation of the feelings both Quinn and Rachel share knowing they have to refrain form acting on them because of _____ . I feel so bad for Quinn and what she went through from her parents, as far as i am concerned her mother is just as guilty as her father. Quinn deserves better she deserves to be happy with Rachel!!!!

emmelia24 January 31 2011, 20:29:10 UTC

Thank you so much! That means so much to me :)

hostile_666 January 30 2011, 21:41:23 UTC

Ooh progress. I just wanna cuddle them both, especially Quinn.
Awsome update :)

emmelia24 January 31 2011, 20:29:29 UTC

Haha! Thank you so much!

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emmelia24 January 31 2011, 20:30:06 UTC

Why thank you! Hopefully I will update sooner rather than later :)

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emmelia24 January 31 2011, 21:30:32 UTC

Wow thank you so much! As an aspiring writer, hearing that I am improving is lovely! I'm actually writing the next chapter now :)

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cyberninjasio January 30 2011, 23:06:54 UTC

Huzzah! Update! But, hey, don't worry about RL coming before fic and the 'net, that's always going to be true, first, last, and always.

This is amazing. I love the slow build of attraction between them. (Even if that song does keep making me think someone's been killed. XD)

One thing though, regarding this line: "Quinn’s heart was screaming no, but her heart was winning." Did you perhaps mean that her mind was screaming no?

Amazing chapter nonetheless!

emmelia24 January 31 2011, 20:32:09 UTC

Huzzah! Haha I love that! And slow build of interaction is what I write. I can't see it happening any other way given their pasts. Thanks for correcting me! Totally missed that. Thank you so much!

sweetiesun January 31 2011, 03:04:13 UTC

ok, first off..YAY you updated!

Now, I have to say, loved the interaction between Rachel and Quinn in this chapter. Even though Quinn freaked a little, she pulled through. And Rachel..absolutely adorable with pulling Quinn close and telling her she deserved better and then pushing her away just in time. Sam seems like a younger version of Quinn's father in the controlling aspect.

I can't wait for your next chapter!

emmelia24 January 31 2011, 20:32:20 UTC

Thank you so much!