Numb3rs Fic: Dodger Blue

[emmademarais]

Posted to numb3rs_slash
Crossposted to ian_nikki

Title: Dodger Blue
Series/Universe: Jet Black
Pairing/Characters: Ian/Nikki/Charlie/Don
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: Seasons 1-5
Summary: Ian invites Charlie and Nikki to play with a special guest: Don
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ

Comments

Confession

[emmademarais]

The long awaited sequel to Jet Black has arrived!

As threatened promised when I published Jet Black, now you have Don

[fyrefly101]

Oh.

Sequel.

And what a sequel.

I uh. I've got nothing. Am totally blown away by how much this works, and how damn hot it is, and all the emotion aside from the sex?

I think I'll have to go lie down in a corner for a bit. You've surpassed yourself with this :) Am totally dead with just how incredible this has been.

(there's more, right?)

[emmademarais]

Thank you so much. /bows/ Your comment honors me.

I think there has to be more. Readers aside I don't think *I* can let this universe go at this point. I already had an idea for a dinner party with Don/Robin, Charlie/Amita and Ian/Nikki, but now I've got another idea for a follow up to this one that's just Don/Charlie at Don's apartment after they leave Nikki's at the end of this fic.

Plus my brain threw me a curve ball earlier - a bunny that I'm not sure fits in this universe, but explains why Ian's interested in Don/Charlie. Ian. With a younger brother. Edgecest. /blinks/

Yeah, my brain boldly goes where no N3 ficcer has gone before... ;-)

[fyrefly101]

Your brain may go, and we all sit here awaiting to see the end result. Ian + brother? *gulp* Couples dinner party? *GULP* And follow-up of Don/Charlie? Cest isn't normally my thing, but after this, I really would have to know what happens in this verse. So yes, please. Wherever your brain may like to take you, I'm fairly sure all us readers will be waiting with baited breath :)

[t_vo0810]

omg omg omg omg. you posted it! u finally posted it! and now i get to read the final draft and relive all the porny goodness. nom nom nom. and Edgecest? did i hear the word Edgecest? It's official. Clearly, you are a goddess.

I am going to save my official reading and commentfest for bedtime. This will be my reward for writing some more fic for nano. Just the kind of motivation I needed. ;D

[emmademarais]

Yay! I ♥ being your NaNo treat!

And just think, however many words you have for NaNo right now? That's how many more than me you have, so go you for doing so well! Hee!

And yes, the concept of Edgecest is already eating my brain. I have no clue who to 'cast' but my brain tells me he's a younger brother, he might have a longish name that Ian has a shorter pet name for and I'm thinking of making him a half-brother so his mother can be full Cherokee versus just the fraction Ian is. That and he has longish dark hair. That curls. ;-)

Gah! As if I needed another distraction to pull me away from NaNoing! /whinges/

[jestana]

Beautiful! This lived up to the first part, and then some. I love how a night of wild sex leads to personal revelations for Nikki and a development in her relationship with Ian. Well done!

Not to mention all the gorgeous visuals you put in my head. *fans self at the thought of Ian and Don together*

[emmademarais]

Thank you! Jet Black certainly left big shoes to fill, but I do believe Dodger Blue was up to the challenge.

And yeah, this may have stoked my interest in the Don/Ian pairing. Yum.

[jestana]

Yay! I did a drabble that was Don/Ian, but more the lead-up to it than anything concrete.

[melissima]

GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH........

I have no other words for how awesome this is.

...

Okay I'll try, just because I ♥ you.

You are a master (Mistress? I'm so accustomed to calling penguingal mistress that it feels weird.) at manipulating the ebb and flow of a story so that it pulls the reader in and allows us to share the characters' experiences. And what experiences they are! From the elevator Pr0n on, I was on the edge of my seat. I'm delighted to hear that you plan to write more in this 'verse.

*Applauds*

[emmademarais]

I had a lovely comment for you, but it went poof. /cries/

No clue what I said, but mistress lowercase works, right? Mags gets the proper title of Mistress. /nod of acknowledgment/ I am still amazed that this porny little tale ended up almost 10K long. There's so much in it, so much going on, that it kind of bends my brain to consider the thing. It grew a life of its own, this universe, and I feel like I'm just the driver. /grins/

Yes, to more, so here's hoping the muse doesn't make any of use wait too long. Strike while the iron foursome is hot, I say!

♥

[melissima]

I'm just the driver. /grins/

*sporfle* Actually, I want The Driver too, but I won't be greedy. :D