Pain In The Heart - Part 1

[emmachase]

Author: emmachase 
Requested by: No One
Title: Pain In The Heart P1
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, Tragedy, with a bit of fluffy fluff
Pairing: OkaJima
Summary: Something has gone wrong as JUMP returns from its break, one of its members is missing... and they must find and bring him back.
Notes: I'm so nervous about this one too! No one requested this one, but

Comments

[ai_star]

T_____________T...what happened to Yuto??..

huwaaaa...poor KeiTo....T_____T...

have another chapter to explain all of this?

[emmachase]

Yep, it'll alllll become clear in Part 2! lol don't worry!

[akira_ny]

uwaa~ what happened to Yuto? O_O
I feel so sorry for Keito T^T

need to read the next chapter ASAP!! XD

[emmachase]

lol I know the feeling! I'm writing it out now! lol

[yelrihs_jefan]

wow... very well written...
but i wonder, what happened 2 Yuto??
i feel so bad for both Yuto and Keito...
i can't wait for the next chapter,
Great work :)

[yelrihs_jefan]

PS: Friend?

[emmachase]

Thanks for reading! Im glad you liked it and sure!

[yumiretheotaku]

Awwwwww.....what happened to yuto?? Poor Keito >.> It's so sad...I need part 2 so badly....
This is your best fanfic that I've read dear....>333 GREAT JOB!
ME WANT CHAPPIE 2!!!

[emmachase]

I know..... dont you waaaaant p2 sooo baaaadly.... lol cause Im still working on it..... haha .... Ganbarimasu!

[yumiretheotaku]

YAYY!! Go for it ne~! :D

[emmachase]

ehe I tryyy

[shieldemblem]

oh gawsh...
you're torturing me!!!

Keito's so deeply & madly in-love with Yuto that he can't help himself but be caring to him~
*sniff sniff*

I'll label this as angst~ X33!

"Yuto... please, come back to me..."

*shot dead*

[emmachase]

Yes.... I am rather sadistic arent I.....hehehe torturing you like this..... ^_^. Ohhhh is that what Angst is.... lol I have no idea about Genres so.... lol let me know.

[shieldemblem]

yeah, you are a SADIST! LoLz! XDD!
you keep on torturing me... (OkaJima here, OkaJima there, OKAJIMA EVERYWHERE!!!)

and yesh,
this is angst~ XDD!
I'll let you know what genre you're writing~ XDD!

and also keep on looking forward that my comments will be the longest ones~ *'coz I keep on quoting everything~* ROFL!

[emmachase]

Hehe OkaJima here.... Okajima there.... Okajima HERE AND THERE AND THERE AND THERE..... puahhaha

lol I love long comments! More to read!