Thank you for your help with it. I was definitely worried about it. I didn't know whether the sand and sea part conveyed well enough but you put my mind at rest.
I honestly mean it :) and I'm glad it made you smile.
I love this song, Maximo Park rock. And this, well this was beautiful. It actually broke my heart. Reading this and listening to Mellon Collie and the Infinate Sadness made me wanna cry.
Fic! By! You! Yay! Very good choice of Maximo Park lyrics aside, this has a really smooth lyrical flow to it. I can picture this whole fic as a series of black and white photos for some reason. I open my mouth, praying that I can make words appear to win you back but you simply close your eyes and shake your head a little, as if you know what I’m trying to do. *tear* ilu.
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I honestly mean it :) and I'm glad it made you smile.
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You amaze me.
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Thank you so much for such a lovely comment, but please don't cry! You make me blush :)
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could really help understand it more
loooved it
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Very good choice of Maximo Park lyrics aside, this has a really smooth lyrical flow to it. I can picture this whole fic as a series of black and white photos for some reason.
I open my mouth, praying that I can make words appear to win you back but you simply close your eyes and shake your head a little, as if you know what I’m trying to do.
*tear* ilu.
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I like the thought of it being a series of black and white photos. Polaroids. Hmm.
Thank you :) ily too.
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Thank you for reading.
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