Title: Chasing Shadows - Part 2
Rating: R
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Word Count: 6,305 (15,512 overall)
Warnings: political intrigue, angst, hurt/comfort
Summary: When a planet's leader is murdered and Jim and Bones are blamed, they end up stranded on the planet injured and not knowing when they'll be rescued.
Part 1 (
Everything sounded like it was underwater, all garbled and distant and holy shit, why did everything hurt? )
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Sorry I'm a little incoherant!
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Part 3 will be posted tomorrow once I finish my other read through - hope you like how my little story ends!
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I still adore that line *happy sigh*
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Your Bones and Jim are so brilliant and real, and the descriptions are so clear that I have no problems at all envisioning this in my head.
Bones's steady decline and how rational he approached it made my heart go out to him thought - how awful to know exactly what is going to come, and how ugly it might be, and having to prepare Jim for it, too.
I can't wait to read chapter 3.
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Your Bones and Jim are so brilliant and real
OMG I am SO HAPPY to hear that! This was my first attempt at these characters and I hoped I was doing well by them since I love them so much.
When I first had this story idea I knew I wanted someone hurt and thought it would almost be too easy if it was Jim that was hurt and I kinda wanted it to be a proving ground for both of them, and I think Jim would've had a too easy time dealing with himself being hurt. And then Bones couldn't freak out because Jim would and he needs him not freaking out to figure out how to save the day.
Sorry for my rambling, but this story has been in my head for like 5 months and only now am I finally able to share it, so I can get a little expositiony. ;) Thanks for reading and commenting and I hope you like the conclusion!
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