An End Has a Start (Dean/Carmen, Sam/Jess R) 8/10

[emiliglia]

Title: An End Has a Start - Part 8
Rating: R
Pairings: Dean/Carmen, Sam/Jess
Word Count: 3,887 (50,221 overall)
Warnings: Wishverse fic, spoilers for S1 & S2 through 2x20
Summary: After Dean wakes up in the hospital with amnesia after an apparent attempted suicide, the answers he seeks just brings more questions before turning his world completely

Comments

[julorean]

:squees: AWESOME. I like how Sam found the pattern with the star, it's just like the series. And I really really love how Dean regains...well, not exactly regains, but our Dean's memories are integrated into his - wonderful parallelism with that occuring after he looks up the flight from "Phantom Traveler". This Dean regains something, while in the episode, he realized what was lost.

[emiliglia]

I was such a nerd looking at a map of Kansas and trying to pick out towns that would make a pentagram. If you look at a map and mark the towns with dots in MSPaint or something, it really does! That was a detail I had planned since the concept outline. ;)

This Dean regains something, while in the episode, he realized what was lost.

Ooooh, I like that!

Thanks for reading!

[gottalovev]

ohhhhh! I didn't think he'd remember everything, that is a great twist! I'm afraid Carmen will need convincing though...

as for the case, we can really feel the frustration of the boys on the research getting nowhere before Sam finds the star pattern.

It's such a great story, and wow, only 2 parts left!

[emiliglia]

Carmen is made of awesome. Or at least in my head she is, apparently. I liked her in the episode so I just kinda tried to build on that and figure out what kind of girl would mesh with Completely!Normal!Dean.

Thanks for reading, sweetie!

[lostandalone22]

Great update! I can't wait to read more.

[emiliglia]

Thank you! Glad you're still reading it! :)

[emiliglia]

Haven't seen Jacob's Ladder... Are the headaches bad? I'm just kinda using them in situations where Dean's have deja vu from the other Dean's memories and it hurts his brain with all the conflicting and confusion. :) Thanks for reading!

[alemyrddin]

oh, wow!
This is really awesome!
I love how rich and interesting and fascinating this is, so full of plot twists, but at the same time I love how much attention you paid to the Sam and Dean relationship, how perceptively they are bonding more and more.
I saved this in a file to read off-line during the holidays, and it's really giving me a good time!
*off to read the remaining two parts*
:)

[emiliglia]

Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it, that it's keeping your attention. I was worried the plot twists would come off as cheesy. :P