For Queen gottalovev: First Times

[emiliglia]

Queen Lou ask for first times, and this is what my muses went with.

Sorry it's like...way angsty, but I think it ends on a good note.

A ficlet for the queen!

Title: Two Firsts and a Last
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jack/Boone, Jack/Sawyer
Word Count: 428
Warnings: Character death, second person narrative
Summary: For lostsquee's luau.

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Comments

[emiliglia]

Only hunky doctors need apply for that treatment method, though. :P

I miss Boone, too. :( Glad you liked it!

[gemjam]

That is just so beautiful. I love the way you put the two kisses side by side here, and how they both show these really desperate times for Jack as a doctor, but with very different outcomes. Both of these work so well, and I wish I could put it into words, because I feel as though you've really hit upon something here. It's kind of haunting, and it's kind of painful, but it's hopeful too. I love that. Great job.

[emiliglia]

Thanks so much, babe! You hit on, like, everything I was trying to make a point of doing! *hugs*

[halfdutch]

Oh! *clutches heart* I love this so much. I loved all of it, so sweet and angsty at the same time, but that last line really did it for me. So good!

[emiliglia]

Thanks so much, babe!

[siluria]

Oh that's just yummy. Sad, but yummy. I can see how Jack got far, it was his unusual doctoring techniques! ;)

[emiliglia]

Hee, yes. Well after Sarah we all know Jack is a sucker for his patients. :P Thanks for reading!

[holycitygirl]

I have fucking chills that is AMAZING!

*loves you forever*

[emiliglia]

Hee, thanks so much, babe!