Fic: "Until My Dying Breath", Chapter Four -- Part One. Kurt/Blaine Vampire AU.

[emilianadarling]

Hello, all! :3 I've been formatting this chapter throughout my classes all morning -- and even a little bit on the bus on my way here! It's made for an interesting ratio of information absorbed to information ignored, for sure. Thank you so much for reading, and I hope you enjoy!

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Title: "Until My Dying Breath" -- Chapter Four
Author: emilianadarling
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[emilianadarling]

And oh, Kurt. Kurt is so very unfair in the way he approaches things sometimes, isn’t he? :/ Of course he knows that Blaine hasn’t had a good sleep; he’s been bloody well making it so that he doesn’t have any good sleeps on purpose! And it’s a question, too, that is ordinarily filled with such care and love, and Kurt has done such a job of putting him on edge. Oh, Kurt. So glad you’re loving him in all his manipulative glory!

because I'm sure he would have hated any evidence of a murder to lead back to Blaine. <-- Mmmmm, very well said. Police make things complicated and difficult and annoying, and when he’s sending a piece of evidence part and parcel to his victim’s house, it’s probably best to make sure that no body is found. Just in case. And especially not with her heart ripped out, good lord, that would make headlines. But I think you’re probably quite right about this; someone random who wouldn’t be missed. Much simpler that way.

Kurt was definitely trying to ingrain some habits into Blaine, for sure. Always be on the alert for me in case I want to talk, or people will die. What a very effective method. And of course Blaine still feels remorse and guilt no matter what, because even though it wasn’t his fault? This is Blaine. :( Mmm, I think I did mention before that there’s a lot of vampire lore that deals with the manipulation of dreams in some way. Even a few incarnations of Dracula, I do believe! :3 Mmmm, and I know that you’ve gone on to read the second half of this chapter, so I shan’t say too much about the dreams. I will say that Kurt is... very much aware that a connection could exist, before. And then Blaine confirmed it for him. And now every little acknowledgement and concession of what Blaine dreams about is just glorious news, indeed. Blaine’s silent, horrified reaction to ‘lover’... well. How intoxicating would that be to have confirmed for you? So glad that line gave you chills; it gave Kurt chills, too.

And ahaha!!! XD I had fun including that bit! Of course Kurt uses the internet! Why would he not? Kurt’s an adaptable kinda guy, haha. Glad you liked that!
And mmm, yes, that line took a while to fully click with Blaine as well. ;_; And I love the way you say this, by the way, because it’s perfect: Because he has absolutely no inhibitions. there is absolutely nothing to stop him from doing what he wants. <-- YES. THIS THIS THIS THIS THIS, a thousand times this. Being turned into a vampire has completely destroyed Kurt’s inhibitions, and now? Now he can do whatever he wants, all the time. What a dangerous, dangerous thing. (Aha, you’re so sweet, too. <3 I’m not published because I’m in school and they only large stories I’ve ever written are fanfic, aha. But I’m starting to get the impression that I should perhaps maybe think about working toward that goal one day. <3 *hug*)

EEEEE!!! :D I’m so happy you liked the phone scene!! AHA SUCCESS. I know that masturbation scenes have a tendency to alienate you, so I’m verrrrry pleased that you enjoyed that one. ;D (And fffffff, that wasn’t even supposed to be a zipper, oops! I made a typo and left out the word ‘eyes’, and it changed the scene a little bit. O_O Kurt’s zipper! Kurt’s! Thanks for pointing that out!) Mmmm, I’m glad you liked the thanking; something that would ordinarily be nice to say suddenly gets turned into something awful and inconsiderate and horrid. Poor Blaine for sure at the end, hating himself so badly for feeling inexplicable feelings. :(

Kurt does call Blaine by his real name, though! :3 Several times throughout the story. In fact: “He wasn’t you, Blaine. I wanted it to be you. I want them all to be you. ” There’s one right there. :) He uses a great many pet names in a very condescending way, but sometimes Blaine’s real name sneaks in. Mostly when Kurt is being rather upfront about something, mmm.

Thank you SO much for taking the time to leave such lovely feedback, hon!! You know how much I appreciate it, and this was a particularly incredible batch! Thank you!!!!