Busybusybusybusy. :) I spent a good chunk of the day getting this done, guys, but guess what? It only took me one day. Seriously, I cannot get over how speedy this editing technique is. I can't believe I tried it before and decided it was rubbish! :D
My goal is to get this all wrapped up and finished before going back to school, which should be
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And oh, yes, Dave and sex. I love that that particular detail jumped out at you -- isn't it marvelous, the way listening to a story can present us with such a different experience than reading it? And how it can highlight such different things that we miss? Because Dave is so, so inconsiderate throughout that entire scene. He's never had a willing partner to give him proper feedback, or be honest, or work through problems with him -- so he just does what he likes and tells Kurt to like it, because it's just that simple in his head. Thank you for pointing out how that jumped out at you; it's so fascinating, to me, what the audio recording highlights.
And thank you very much about the 'voices'! :) I don't do as in-depth voices as I'm sure I could, but I do like to try to distinguish them a bit from one another. And Dave is just so, so fucked up in this -- the way he deludes himself is just sad, a lot of the time. I'm so very pleased that my changes in tone are coming across loud and clear; Blaine and Kurt in the library was a lovely break from the mood of the rest of the chapter to read aloud.
Thank you so very much!! Chapter Three will be coming along fairly soon. :) <3 <3 <3 you forever, hon!!
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