fic: City Lights Lay Out Before Us (part five)

[emerri03]

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Comments

[masja_17]

Oh, poor boys, they never could live without the other! And you got Jess in at the end. Liked the touch with the green eyes! Great story!

<3

[twnchesterangel]

This was very well written and very plausible! I totally was NOT expecting the fight between them at the end! I figured this was just an AU and that was really good already but then I was pleasantly suprised with how it ended. It was sad and heartbreaking and soulcrushing but it could also easily fit in with canon. "Ya know, in almost 2 years I haven't bothered you, haven't asked you for a thing." And I loved how you wrote Brady. And OMG, Jess IS the female Dean. Height, eyes, hair, birthday, everything. I love that you pointed that out. Very nice! Loved it! *hugs*

[sandycub]

Really loved this story! Could feel their feelings, it all hurt so much I really felt for each of the boys. You tied it so nicely into canon!

[nixhaw]

So, no pressure, but what you really need to do now is continue this story where season one picks up. Pretty please? Coz honestly? I'm dying here. The scene in the kitchen actually killed me. I am commenting from the beyond.

And I get it. I get why Dean did it. I think. But it was so harsh. And I can't stop thinking about it even hours after finishing the story. I reckon that's the sign of a good story.

Thanks for sharing this and really, you need to work on the follow up. I would like my heart to start beating again.

[verucasalt123]

Ow, that parting scene between the brothers was tough. But what a great story! I really enjoyed it.