Fic: Stress-Busters

[emeriin]

Title: Stress-Busters
Pairing: Donna/Paw/Benzaie, with a cameo from Ellis
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 710
Disclaimer: Donna? Mine. The rest? Not in the slightest.
A/N: For the “Other” Tag Challenge! Hope you enjoy.

Comments

[freya_sacksen]

He might have been nicer to them than Michaud was but he was still a dick.
Give what we've seen of Michaud, that's...not hard.

"I don't see any of the others complaining."
Oh, BURNED!

She let a smile tug at her mouth. "Let me guess, this is a 'you know everything' deal, right?"
I suddenly had this image of Ellis having, like, a flow chart hanging on the wall somewhere, showing all the various relationships, and going and making little corrections every now and then.

The crowd still hadn't died down, her heels were killing her and she would have taken them off if some twats hadn't vomited on the floor.
*shudders* I know her pain. New Year's 2008/9. God, I know her pain. Especially since I only really go out clubbing during summer, and I spend most of summer barefoot anyway.

She didn't even think Benzaie could handle having to be on the streets, let alone the rest.
Aw, she cares! ...Not that it means much, but she cares!

As soon as the last drunk-off-their-ass idiot was hustled out, she didn't bother changing.Walking home is gonna

[aunt_zelda]

I suddenly had this image of Ellis having, like, a flow chart hanging on the wall somewhere, showing all the various relationships, and going and making little corrections every now and then.
He's the Vetinari of the Hookerverse.

[freya_sacksen]

He's the Vetinari of the Hookerverse.
Does that make Michaud his Vimes?

[aunt_zelda]

*grinz* Oh god, that's the bestest mental image EVER and I don't know why ...

[heirii]

Hey honey. I'm just about to go to bed, as you know, so I'll just do a quick comment for now. I might expand on this later.
Firstly, you captured an interesting rawness which I liked. I don't remember reading many fics involving Donna before.

I also like how you portrayed Benzaie pretty well, but I knew you would. You have a knack for these kind of characters.

Much love and hugs. xoxox

[emeriin]

Well as she was only in a random number generator fic before this so I'm not surprised you don't remember. Silly baby. ;) And thankies very much for the love, m'darling. :D

[keevacaereni]

I love Donna. :D My feet ache like a bitch after work, and I wear flats. *gives her a foot massage*

"Let's count them down, shall we?
This whole section is made of win. *grins* You tell him, Donna.

Oh yeah, definitely good stress relief.
Only the best from Paw and Benzaie, eh? :P

This was really good, mate. You can feel the frustration and tiredness and stress of a busy day at work with too few staff.

[emeriin]

This whole section is made of win. *grins* You tell him, Donna.

Possibly the only verse where you get character details from working as a hooker. :P Thankies for the love!

[timidfox]

Even in the hooker!Verise benzaie makes me smile XD

May I say you have given me the mental image of Paw being like a Siren with his music :$

[emeriin]

It's Benzaie! How could he not? :D

And now I want fanart of that, damn you woman.

[timidfox]

of siren paw?

I'll add it to my list since I'm going to have a huge bing of drawing (and for the life of me remeber what i was planning on drawing since i lost my orgainl list >_<;; )

[emeriin]

Girl, please, patience is a virtue. ;) And you know how virtuous I am.

[emeriin]

*bows* I'm most happy to be a master at something, oh Queen of Y. ;)

I love how everyone's wincing at the idea of working in high heeled boots, it sounds like a nightmare doesn't it?