Comments | emerald_green37: Inter-agency Nightmare 5/?

emerald_green37

Inter-agency Nightmare 5/?

Apr 11, 2013 07:09

Keeping a blank look on his face, Gibbs looked up when the door opened again. Colonel O'Neill was standing there, but he didn't come into the room. Instead, he crooked a finger and turned, expecting Gibbs to follow him. Gibbs did, but looked down the corridor to the room where he believed McGee was being held in. O'Neill smirked, but didn't ( Read more... )

ncis, inter-agency nightmare, stargate, slash

Comments 6

wingstar102 April 11 2013, 15:47:49 UTC

Sorry I'm late! Son wanted me to write the alphabet for him. LOL. And I'm supposed to be packing, so this will be quick. Loved this chapter. Gibbs is so sweet and I really wish Tim would pick up on what Gibbs is feeling towards him. Jack and Daniel at al are awesome! Will beg and grovel for more!

Love and cherries,
Wingstar

emerald_green37 April 11 2013, 16:30:46 UTC

Thanks! Packing? Vacation or moving? Good luck either way.

Tim feels more than he's willing to admit :) We'll be seeing this very soon.

ncisrox April 11 2013, 22:28:56 UTC

I love the way this is developing. The SG/NCIS standoff seems to be building as Gibbs continues to try and find ways to protect McGee while the SG team continues their informatiion gathering. As happens so often with your writing, its the little moments I love best from Daniel being observant while Jack is oblivious, to Tony refusing to leave NCIS without some assurance that Gibbs and McGee are safe even without his help, and of course, my two personal favorites, Gibbs checking out McGee's ass in thebathroom mirror and then giving him a foot massage. Can't wait for more.

emerald_green37 April 12 2013, 18:20:22 UTC

Wonder who will blink first. SGC certainly has much more of a time table, so.... Glad you like the little moments, to me they tell as much or more of the story than the big ones.

Next chapter will go up tonight, just doing some final tweaking.

bymagajones April 16 2013, 01:30:07 UTC

Everybody's hooking up everywhere! If they'd put Jack and Daniel together as well as Carter and Teal'c, I might've kept watching the show.

Touching base back at NCIS was a nice touch.

emerald_green37 April 16 2013, 04:10:36 UTC

Thanks. There's really too much action to really have any action, if you know what I mean, but I wanted that hint to go along with the pre-slash for the guys.