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emerald_green37

What's Eating Timothy McGee? 7/? gen.

Jul 30, 2012 09:24

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ncis, h/c bingo, gen, what's eating timothy mcgee?

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wingstar102 July 30 2012, 17:03:02 UTC

Doubling up! Tim's treatment still makes me queasy. Ick. Get better, ok? Will beg and grovel for more!

Love and cherries,
Wingstar

emerald_green37 July 30 2012, 17:29:57 UTC

Yep, double ick. Dental surgery on Wednesday, hopefully I'll start to feel better after that. Thanks.

naemi July 30 2012, 17:34:27 UTC

Thoughtful!Tony is great.
When Jenny asked if McGee could feel the maggots, I could hardly resist the urge to google for it. Gro-o-o-ss. I'll leave it up to you to answer that question (or not) in the next part ^.^

emerald_green37 July 30 2012, 18:58:26 UTC

Yeah, I love to see Thoughtful!Tony. Too bad we don't see it very often. We'll see how many of those details make it into the story and how many I leave to your imagination.

honor_reid July 30 2012, 19:04:46 UTC

I am glad Tony finally caught on to what Tim needed from him. I can't believe Abby would use Tim's pain for art that is extremely thoughtless. Loving Papa!Gibbs he is doing such a good job of taking care of Tim.

:D

emerald_green37 July 30 2012, 21:45:55 UTC

Tony's finally gotten a clue. Safe in her lab and surrounded by only images and test results instead of the reality of the pain and suffering that the rest of them see, Abby has a real disconnect with reality at times. The fact that she has "art" up on her walls that's actually close up pictures of blood and brain tissue is very telling. Perhaps if she left her safe lab and actually saw Tim's pain and discomfort?

honor_reid July 31 2012, 02:59:40 UTC

That may help, but she not only hides in her lab but she also tends to hide behind a "little girl" demeanor, which drives me just a little bit crazy.

I forgot to say earlier but great chapter!

emerald_green37 July 31 2012, 14:14:23 UTC

That she does. Thanks.

68luvcarter July 31 2012, 03:34:42 UTC

I had been wondering since the treatment if the patient would be able to feel them moving around and it makes me squirm to imagine. I am so loving this story. It's rare to find a Gibbs/McGee father/son relationship fic that is this touching.

emerald_green37 July 31 2012, 14:11:54 UTC

Thanks, some details will be in later chapters, some I'll leave to your imagination. I love writing this dynamic.

ahavia July 31 2012, 06:51:27 UTC

So sad and scary!

emerald_green37 July 31 2012, 14:13:18 UTC

Thanks, I wouldn't want to be in his shoes, that's for sure.