Comments | emerald_green37: What's Eating Timothy McGee? Chapter 2, gen.

emerald_green37

What's Eating Timothy McGee? Chapter 2, gen.

Jun 26, 2012 09:22

ncis, h/c bingo, gen, fiction, what's eating timothy mcgee?

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wingstar102 June 26 2012, 20:20:21 UTC

Sorry I'm late! Three-year-old decided to be absolutely disgusting and it took forever to clean up. Ick. Anyway. Great chapter! This really highlights the only really problem I have with this series: Abby always gets away with being an unprofessional brat. Nobody ever calls her on it. Happy to see Gibbs did here. LOL. So awesome. Loved this! Will beg and grovel for more!

Love and cherries,
Wingstar

emerald_green37 June 26 2012, 21:31:24 UTC

Totally understand. It must be something in the air because the three-year-old here is driving me up the wall, too. So is her brother. Abby and Tony and their behavior at times will be a minor thread running through the story. How will they feel when they realize just how serious this is and that Tim won't go to them? Especially as they realize that Gibbs is Tim's support person?

wingstar102 June 26 2012, 23:29:54 UTC

Must be that damn Venus transit effecting kids. LOL. I figured that's what you were going to do with Tony and Abby, but I didn't want to assume. And how come I get the feeling this fic is going to end up slightly bigger than you planned?

emerald_green37 June 27 2012, 15:10:52 UTC

Have I ever had a story become larger than planned? Don't answer that. :)

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honor_reid June 27 2012, 05:45:22 UTC

Great story. I love that you used this episode to write about. I have always had issues with this one so it is nice to see a story about it.

I am loving how supportive Gibbs is being with Tim!

Can't wait till the next chapter!

emerald_green37 June 27 2012, 15:12:36 UTC

Thanks, I've decided to use Papa!Gibbs as the underlying theme of this row on my bingo card.

I've always had issues with this ep, too, and with this prompt I couldn't resist.