Knowing and Seeing 1/3

[emebalia]

Chapter 1

Bobby ended the phone call and took a deep breath. That was it. No turning back now. Even if he wanted to back off, and a huge part of him wanted to do just that, it was too late. It had taken him two full days to set up the room, one for throwing out the old stuff and one for getting the new stuff in, and now it was too late to change his

Comments

[jennytork]

One thing -- you have Sam having cracked rips at one point....

[emebalia]

Thanks, I corrected it. The German word rib is "Rippe" and I always get that one wrong.

[jennytork]

Very welcome! And thank you for teaching me a new word!

[leighannwallace]

This is great. God, I love Bobby.

[emebalia]

Bobby, I miss him. Thanks.

[antrazi]

Nice start. I just have to say I'm totally surprised you wrote even just implied wincest...

[emebalia]

It wanted to be written ...
One day I'll have the courage to write the Wincest+malehooker'verse that's nagging me for some time now. Damn plot bunnies.

[antrazi]

I know how it is. I always said I just write gen and suddenly I filled a kínk prompt!

[emebalia]

Or it starts with a fill for a kink prompt and then you have a novel and wonder if you can sell it.

[dont_hate_me01]

"There is a bed in our room." Dean finally managed to say. - LOL!!! I giggled so hard at this. I love Bobby in this, I'm glad that he's doing this for the boys.

Can't wait for the next part! :-)

[emebalia]

I giggled while I wrote it ;)
Yeah, Bobby is great.

[nindevotee]

Love, love, love! So much to love about this! *sniffle* Wish Bobby was still around.

[emebalia]

Me too. Thanks.