[fic]Kuroshitsuji; Sebastian/Ciel

[emcyclopedia]

Race to the Finish
by emcyclopedia

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pre-au of this fic;
752 words

disclaimer; kuroshitsuji isn't mine :(

Comments

[lksugui]

Aww, that's adorable and well-written :D I like the way you describe how hard it is for Ciel to run and lose. Very much made of win! <3<3<3

[emcyclopedia]

tyty :D I revised it so many times. I was hoping to create the same image in my head about how Ciel would be so bitter about losing and stuff. :X

[animegoil]

:( Made me sad. Man. You made an elementary school race be SAD. But it was really, really good.

[emcyclopedia]

:( I am sorry. T 3T It wasn't meant to be sad. Ciel won first place in my first draft. But yanno. :X I didn't think he can do it. xD tyty :)))

[animegoil]

Hahaha, yes, props for the realism of him NOT winning first place :)

[emcyclopedia]

xDDD god yeah. Now I wanna write that non-con with girl!ciel that's been sitting in the kink meme for the longest time...

[selinianuo]

Aww, this is quite cute, in a bittersweet way. Did you mean to parallel that with lemon cake? Or am I just being weird, ahah.

[emcyclopedia]

xDD The lemon cake just because I had lemon cake earlier when I wrote this :">

[koishii_hime]

I REMEMBER I READ THIS BUT I DON'T SEE A COMMENT. i see this other really weird one though.

BUT YES. :D i didn't think it was sad. it was a good lesson for ciel to learn. ♥ and it's endearing at the same time you want to cuddle him a little, before he like, kicks you in the shin or something. METAPHORICALLY OF COURSE. he'd never be so vulgar.

[emcyclopedia]

OH YOU xD ♥