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embolalia

Fic: Descant (chapter 9)

Feb 02, 2012 07:52

Title: Descant (Chapter 9)
Rating: R
Characters: Kara/Leoben, Helo, Caprica, Hera, & more
Word Count (this chapter): 2,464
WARNINGS: Non-canon character death. Canon-level violence and themes.

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athena, kara/leoben, battlestar galactica, caprica six

Comments 11

hearts_blood February 2 2012, 13:28:01 UTC

My reactions, in order:

- OMG D:

- YAY! :D

- Ooooh... thinky.

- *wibbles*

- HOTNESS

- More thinky.

- Awww. <3<3<3

embolalia February 2 2012, 14:32:13 UTC

Hah! Glad to know each scene his its designated emotional beat :)

hearts_blood February 2 2012, 14:35:59 UTC

You're consistently rendering me incapable of actually responding coherently to your chapters. Be proud. ;)

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embolalia February 2 2012, 22:04:02 UTC

Thanks so much, dear! There are pieces of this chapter I like a lot, too, so I'm glad you enjoyed it :) And yes, what each of them saw (or heard) will matter!

kag523 February 3 2012, 04:18:58 UTC

Okay - I delayed reading this all day because I say your lj cut of Oh Gods and I decided that I could NOT RISK TEARING UP AT SCHOOL. And then I read it and I was screaming "you can't do this to me after making me love them so much and healing ALL MY ISSUES WITH NEW CAPRICA!" And then, of course, you pulled the switch, and though I loved the results - I'm also left with this feeling of foreboding. I want to trust that all will be well, but that first section felt like a premonition to me. Oh goodness - I HATE WAITING FOR YOUR CHAPTER POSTINGS DAMNIT ( ... )

embolalia February 3 2012, 13:57:11 UTC

WELL. Let me say this. There are four chapters still, so clearly not everything will be just saccharine that whole time, but any bad things that happen are directly necessary to fulfill various visions and get them to Earth.

But I'm glad you're invested in the story! It really makes me so happy :)

And as far as Earth goes, I've been getting questions from my roommates ( who are up to the end of season 2) about why no one's mentioned Earth since Kobol...and I don't really have answers. So I'm glad this feels more deliberate!

shadowserenity February 3 2012, 04:45:57 UTC

Oooh. Are they going to go back to Cavil's forces and find some of the Five? Love how this is developing :).

embolalia February 3 2012, 13:58:30 UTC

*Shrug* I couldn't really say ;) Thanks for reading along!

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embolalia February 5 2012, 14:38:15 UTC

Aren't they darling? So yes, of course that gets taken away...at least for now. I just put up chapter 10, and you'll see what I mean :)