As many of you know, and some may not, I'm working on a Hawaii Five-0/Ella Enchanted fusion. Danny is cursed with obedience, and shenanigans and angst ensue. It's a delightful story to write, and I love it to pieces, but I'm wondering if I can get a little feedback on a couple points that are stalling me. If you have any questions about the story ( Read more... )