Comments | ember_firedrake: [Hawaii Five-0] Steve/Danny

ember_firedrake

[Hawaii Five-0] Steve/Danny - Slow Me Down

Jan 19, 2011 15:10

Title: Slow Me Down
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Word Count: 1,454
Rating: NC-17
Contains: PWP, finger-fucking and dirty talk

( I realize you can go from zero to sixty in three seconds flat, but some of us like to take our time, to savor the experience. )

fanfic, hawaii five-0

Comments 55

tailoredshirt January 19 2011, 20:28:34 UTC

This made me ridiculously happy. I love the glimpse of Steve's vulnerability, and the banter, and then dirty talk, guh. This was really hot.

ember_firedrake January 20 2011, 19:00:41 UTC

Thank you! I was joking on Twitter, I seem to be incapable of writing porn involving them that doesn't have them bantering over something. XD

kelly_girl January 19 2011, 20:40:23 UTC

Very hot. This'll teach me about reading at work! Everyone is wondering why I'm fanning myself.

ember_firedrake January 20 2011, 19:01:44 UTC

Hehe! Well...I wrote it in public, if that's any consolation. :)

Also, icon twins!

sycophantastic January 19 2011, 20:43:02 UTC

I love how Danny's alternately a big tease with his own damn pace & his lecture on Steve's adrenaline-junkie tendencies, & also a really thoughtful, considerate guy who wants Steve to be just as fulfilled as he can be.

And he's also hot as fuck. Because... GNUH... Danny, you are GOOD with your hands. And talking dirty suits you, my verbose friend. xD

Awesome, love it! Please keep writing H50 fic (and please forgive my ridiculous tendancy to talk to the characters as though they can hear me *blush*). \o/

ember_firedrake January 20 2011, 19:09:11 UTC

Thank you so much for the feedback! I like to think Danny's really considerate in bed. As he says, he's a catch.

"My verbose friend" xD Love that.

I don't think I'm going to stop writing H50 fic anytime soon. This fandom has its hooks in me, and I don't want it to let go. :)

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ember_firedrake January 20 2011, 19:09:27 UTC

Thank you!

fanarts_series January 19 2011, 20:54:23 UTC

I think that you kill my last braincells.
and i need them to rise my kids, you're going to have to rise them yourself, them and my husband.

Too hot *Contains: PWP, finger-fucking and dirty talk*
And you have to add a warning : BRAIN KILLER
<3 <3 <3

Thanks so much for that.

ember_firedrake January 20 2011, 19:15:49 UTC

Hehe! I'd apologize for the hotness...but that would require me being contrite. ;) Thank you!