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Fic: Miniature Disasters and Minor Catastrophes (Part 1)

Nov 29, 2009 22:17

Title: Miniature Disasters and Minor Catastrophes (Part 1 ( Read more... )

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flister November 29 2009, 23:13:20 UTC

Oh man! Is this a Katie/Naomi/JJ love triangle thang?! Awesome if so, and still awesome if not.

This is cool - like you've started off with Emily and Naomi broken up so you've left it open for possibilities.

And the way you had Katie and JJ kiss felt all right, like quite organic.

And this line made me LOL: Katie has a vague thought about trying to keep Freddie, who is still utterly pathetic, away from Emily, just in case they inspire each other to off themselves.

Good work! Looking forward to more :)

em_sh November 29 2009, 23:43:45 UTC

... No comment ;)

I think that Katie would take every opportunity to stick the boot into poor Freds, and really, who am I to stand in her way?

I'm really pleased you liked it, especially given your K/N epic, so cheers muchly :)

flister November 29 2009, 23:48:47 UTC

;)

It just conjured up this nice image of the two of them being sat there all mopey and like 'pfft, life sucks. Joint suicide?' Not that I'd want that, obviously, but I could just seem them sat there together :)

No worries - the more K/N love/hate the better I reckon. <3

thecon12 November 30 2009, 00:05:18 UTC

This was really good. You've hooked me in completely. I really love it when someone takes a good stab at Katie, she was so underdeveloped on the show that it's always interesting to see what direction people take her.

*Cough* [See my icon for my true feelings ;)]

<3

em_sh November 30 2009, 00:19:42 UTC

True feelings duly noted!
I'm glad you liked it! :)

flister November 30 2009, 11:02:35 UTC

LOL, Jess babes, don't you know it's blasphemy to talk about stabbing Katie? ;)

Repent, please. Immediately.

thecon12 November 30 2009, 11:09:56 UTC

Who's saying I meant stab in a violent way? Maybe I meant a good stab at Katie in a more loving way ;)

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em_sh November 30 2009, 17:32:21 UTC

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, friend away :)

musicffyou November 30 2009, 02:14:15 UTC

lol oh gosh. I'm just gonna see where you take this and flow with it. awesome chapter.

em_sh November 30 2009, 17:32:45 UTC

Haha, super, I hope you enjoy the ride then!

sway05 November 30 2009, 04:05:51 UTC

oh god this is just packed with possibilities!.. but i love naomily though! lol.Seriously though,this is really good.Cant wait to see where u take it :)

em_sh November 30 2009, 17:34:26 UTC

I think I have it all sorted in my head, but you're right there's a lot more options than I had first thought of, so I hope I go the right way!