Fic: All the PI’s Men (Logan/Veronica, Ensemble) NC-17 (2/7)

[em2mb]

Title: “All the PI’s Men”
Author: em2mb
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, Mac, Keith, Weevil, Wallace, Piz, Sacks.
Word Count: 10,135
Rating: NC-17, some of the good kind, some of the not-so-good kind.
Summary: “He just didn’t seem like the type,” Mac said flatly. Finally, she allowed her boyfriend to wrap his arms around her. “Right?”

Comments

[annie_oakley]

Amazing, amazing, amazing. I really want to give longer, detailed feedback, but I just have to stick with amazing for now. You're touching on so many things I wanted in canon, in particular with Veronica and Keith's relationship, which I felt was a joke in the second and particularly third season. I loved the last part, their confrontation. Amazing. And I love the image of Keith so broken and drunk after her death, and Veronica appearing to him. I also adored the love scene with Logan, and her, "I love you." It all fits so perfectly for them.

And oh man, Logan! This would KILL him. Just kill him. It's heartbreaking to read, but so well written and addictive. Awesome job! I really look forward to the next part.

[em2mb]

Argh, okay. Not to sound creepy, or freak you out, but I'm so glad you're reading this. 'Cause, uh, I'd pretty much talked myself out of getting (actively) involved in another fandom when I became obsessed with Veronica Mars, but then I read Like a Rolling Stone, and I couldn't contain myself. So, uh, yeah, you're kind of the reason I'm here. Bet you didn't know that.

Keith and Veronica's relationship definitely went downhill, especially in season three. (In season two, I felt like she was just out of touch with him, much like she was with many of her relationships.) I felt like a blow-up was brewing. The other day, I read something about how RT never expected them to have the awesome season one relationship they did, but the networked wanted her to have someone, and the idea of a standoff-ish Keith/Veronica intrigued me. I went back and redid a lot of their scenes, making them harsher. Glad to know it worked! Thanks for reading!

[annie_oakley]

So, uh, yeah, you're kind of the reason I'm here.

Hey, that's pretty much the best compliment I ever got over the internet! Thank you!

[em2mb]

I try. :) No seriously, I'm in love with that fic. I dunno if I ever commented, but I pull it up and read it every few weeks b/c it's so good. Two of my fave's, combined.

[annie_oakley]

Thank you! I really want to write something else for VM, but it's hard to get started. Reading other fic definitely helps inspire you to write, though, so maybe yours can help me out.

[blahblahologist]

I wasn't sure if I wanted to start reading this fic since I totally hate Veronica Mars and ugh, why am I even checking this community still? But then I saw that you commented and now I'm thinking it's probably really good. THANKS A LOT.

Hey em2mb, do you already have most of this fic written by any chance? And are you going to post the rest in a timely-ish manner? I know I sound like a bitch but this fic sounds really good and I do really want to read it. I just get upset when WIPs are never finished, so I need so reassurance on this.

[em2mb]

I have four of the seven chapters written. I've posted two, one is exactly how I want it, and I'm still tinkering with the last. Now - those chapters aren't neccessarily the first four. But I do have all of the fic plotted out in overwhelming detail on my handy-dandy 5x8 notecards. So, my hope would be to get chapter three up in about a week, and post every week-week-and-a-half after that. So yes, it will definitely be finished!

[blahblahologist]

Oh, you have an updating plan, I love it. I will definitely go back and read the first two chapters and then come back here and review. Thanks for answering my annoying questions! ;)

[em2mb]

No problem! Hope you enjoy it!