Fic: All the PI’s Men (Logan/Veronica, Ensemble) NC-17 (2/7)
Title: “All the PI’s Men”
Author: em2mb
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, Mac, Keith, Weevil, Wallace, Piz, Sacks.
Word Count: 10,135
Rating: NC-17, some of the good kind, some of the not-so-good kind.
Summary: “He just didn’t seem like the type,” Mac said flatly. Finally, she allowed her boyfriend to wrap his arms around her. “Right?”
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Author: em2mb
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, Mac, Keith, Weevil, Wallace, Piz, Sacks.
Word Count: 10,135
Rating: NC-17, some of the good kind, some of the not-so-good kind.
Summary: “He just didn’t seem like the type,” Mac said flatly. Finally, she allowed her boyfriend to wrap his arms around her. “Right?”
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The sentence about the DNA was a last minute addition. I wanted to clarify what I meant by "two matches," and that structure just worked. It got penciled right in.
I felt like I needed some kind of a sweet scene before everything went to hell, and I realized it worked in the context. On the other hand, I suppose it makes it that much worse, that they could have an awesome moment like that and her die before he ever got a chance to make things work between them.
Heh, I like (hate?) Mark Jarvis. He's a little shout out to everything I hate about journalism today. He's overdone and cheesy, and exactly how I want him. He'll be back, no worries.
I really wish VM hadn't have gotten cancelled before we got to see much Max/Mac. They could have been fun. And I totally agree - it's those little moments where you just are like, oh damn because whoever is gone.
I oddly find myself missing Dick, too. I kind of remember him in the context "everyone made up different stories in 1x21 to cover their own ass, and he didn't really leave Beaver in that wrong with her," which helps. I think there may be a little extra Dick thrown into the scenes I hadn't written yet b/c I miss him, even if it's not enough to give him a starring role.
You will see them back at the Grand! In a few chapters. *smiles evilly*
I really feel bad about Backup after today, which I spent with my brother picking up his new puppy. We spent 12 hours in a car, and we're both still alive, but PUPPY. And I was mean to poor Backup. But I felt like he'd be one of the things to go when Keith went downhill. The line is so automatic in fic - "Backup whined to be let out" - and I wanted something different. Something that was so NOT Keith Mars. And I'm glad you like the K/V scenes, b/c they're some of my favorites so far.
Hope you're well; thank you for all the wonderful feedback. I'm working towards the next part, I promise. I go back to school in nine days, but hopefully we'll come up with a balance of school/writing to at least get through this WIP.
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"You will see them back at the Grand! In a few chapters. *smiles evilly*"
WAIT! I should have qualified that-- I want to see them at the Grand HAPPY! Happy, I say! NOT dark and twisty! Damn, why do I feel as if I'm too late...
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