Fic: All the PI’s Men (Logan/Veronica, Ensemble) NC-17 (1/7)

[em2mb]

Title: “All the PI’s Men”
Author: em2mb
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, Mac, Keith, Weevil, Wallace, Piz, Sacks.
Word Count: 9,754
Rating: NC-17, and not always the good kind. This chapter is tamer than what’s to come, but you’ve been warned: it’s dark and twisty.
Summary: Dammit, Veronica, he thought. Are you starting to see what it does

Comments

[earth2mars]

*Sigh.* Aw man. You know I love this story. I really do. How many times have I read these sections and they still NEVER get old.

Your characterization is spot on, the mystery completely intriguing, the fleshing out of minor characters--perfect, and the description of Logan's pain (and Keith's, of course) completely moving.

I've said it before about your work, but I'll say it again: It rocks.

Seriously.

I can't wait for the rest!

[em2mb]

It means a lot coming from you, it really does. Seriously, you give the best feedback, and it was invaluable when I first sent this chapter to you. The fact that you read it and enjoyed it and saw beyond the evils of killing Veronica and told me to go ahead was just so important, I can't even describe how much. Thank you, a million times over, for all your kind words. You are the best kind of LJ friend.

I thought I'd already responded to this, but no.

[earth2mars]

" saw beyond the evils of killing Veronica "
Of course, ONE day I'd like to challenge you to write something just a little fluffy and less angsty. ;)

You deserve each and every kind word--thank you for allowing me to read the story and for writing it so well.

Re: I thought I'd already responded to this, but no.

[em2mb]

I don't know if you'll be happy/scared to find that this month's challenge over at vm_library has really sparked my interest. And even if what I can already envision isn't totally fluffy, the ending at least isn't utterly tragic.

Re: I thought I'd already responded to this, but no.

[earth2mars]

Okay. I'll settle for that then. Not fluffy, but not utterly tragic either. :)