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[em1983]

Annie had been accepted to a real college - not that Greendale University wasn't a real college. But, well, you know. So naturally she was happy. So naturally she wanted to celebrate, though even she knew that those two words - "Annie" and "celebrating" - generally didn't go together. But she was 20 now, not the same girl she was at 18, and she

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[greta_garbo]

This was great! A wonderful way to start a long, long day at work.

[greta_garbo]

<3 Isn't reading fanfic just great to kick off your day? :)

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Though I realize the mistake of writing something so late at night - in the harsh light of day (and after a cup of coffee) I'm noticing all these stupid grammatical errors! Lol! Oh well.

[em1983]

Apparently I felt like being anonymous today! Lol!

[greta_garbo]

I've developed the system of posting something at 2 in the morning, going to bed, and then reading it over the next day and fixing all the problems I find. And then that way I can be like, "Hey guys, I totally fixed all the grammar in my story. Go read it again."

[xtear_drop]

Um..you better continue this story, because it was sooo good! Great job!

[xtear_drop]

That's exactly what my sister said to me on msn when I asked her to read it. She was like "um, is that it?" Lol! But I don't know where else to go with it. I have to ponder that. But I do want to continue it, for sure. And now that's I've gotten my feet wet in the Jeff/Annie fanfic side of the pool, I might dive right in and start writing some more! <3

[fleete]

Loved this! I particularly liked your setting, for some reason, because it's out of the ordinary for our characters, and you put in enough detail that I can really feel it, imagine it, and you can just *feel* Annie's discomfort being there all alone and then being there all alone with Jeff, and it was great. Him buying her shoes?!? Jeff would *so* do that.

This is definitely not a fic that doesn't deserve a name. In fact, it deserves a sequel!! Ooh! Or maybe a Jeff-POV. *makes doe eyes at you* Pweese?

[em1983]

A Jeff POV? Hmmmm....*strokes chin thoughtfully* I'm intrigued by this. But, oh man, I'm so worried about keeping him in character! Lol! He's kinda tricky to me.

Goodness, I love this show! <3 I haven't shipped anyone this hard since...well, forever!

[0penhearts]

So, this DEFINITELY doesn't suck. And you should write more. Because I need to know what happens when they dance! And after they dance! And for like the rest of their long and happy and sexy life together, which clearly gets kicked off on this evening because, dude, Jeff wore a suit and gave her sexy shoes. Which is weird, but awesome in a very Jeff-ish way.

[em1983]

Thanks!!!

"long and happy and sexy life together" - perfect!

The shoes idea came to me when I was thinking about the height difference between them and the fact that Annie always wearing those flats is what partly makes her so young (and adorable) and that I could totally see Jeff thinking her induction into adulthood should come with some slutty heels - and because I could totally see Jeff wanting to see Annie is slutty heels. Lol!!

[lightningmoon09]

You don't give yourself enough credit. This fic was delightful. A great way to end my work day. I really hope you continue this.

[em1983]

Thanks!! *blushes*