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Haiku

Feb 29, 2016 10:01

I issued a tiny challenge on Elysian Fields, and thought it would be nice to post them all here so people can see them collected in one place ( Read more... )

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cryptwarmer February 29 2016, 15:03:09 UTC

S4, Something Blue

The taste of her kiss,
Why don't I get a cookie,
to help me forget.

S2

I crash into town
to make her neck my chalice,
Buffy bleeds me dry

ladypeyton February 29 2016, 16:24:23 UTC

Took a bad dog to
the vet to prevent it from
chasing other dogs

cryptwarmer February 29 2016, 18:59:45 UTC

I giggle every time I read this, and remember him talking about not chasing other puppies anymore...https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BVRNV3mfH6o

pfeifferpack February 29 2016, 17:04:37 UTC

Gold Goddess glowing
Warrior, my Boadicea
Words reveal a bitch!

That's from my "fic" Intermezzo that has different forms of poetry as written by "William" or Spike and diary entries by Buffy intermixed. Kinda fits most seasons until S7.

Haiku laetittya February 29 2016, 18:16:45 UTC

Joining the Spuffy Haiku thread:

Dancing he saw her
Could not resist to love her
For love died for her.

(Posted on the EF shout box as VampyreLover)

freecat15 February 29 2016, 21:56:07 UTC

I LOVE this idea!
So many great, truly poetic haiku!
Here is mine (s6, of course):

He yearns for her to
feel for him she needs him to
feel something at all