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K so a few poems I wrote yesterday, when I was kinda down and venting due to Valentine's Day.
FADE
I guess this life wants us apart
Deep inside this dreaming heart
I see us both, together; still
It fades away, and always will.
AUTOPILOT
I don't even have a choice anymore
I can't help but think of you
But you'll never be mine, and what's more,
It's starting to show through.
I'm on autopilot around you
I laugh, I talk, I smile
I can always hope it will come true
If it at, not for a long, long while
DREAM
It's times like these I dream of you
Dreams that I wish would come true
It's funny how it always seems
All that I can do is dream
FARTHER
Luck's a stranger, chance a dream;
Hopes are running rampant, free
Wishes spent and yet you seem
Farther, now, away from me
CLOSER
Pull me closer, hurt me again
It stings, being just your friend
Bring me closer, bittersweet pain
Hurt me, kill me, hurt me again
Constructive criticism is always welcome. This is my first real attempt at writing poems and while I personally think they're better than any of my lame school poems, I'd love to hear from you!