Fanfiction: Black Ice

Oct 06, 2010 12:03


Okay, so I posted this on fanfiction.net already, but I thought I would post it here too - hope you enjoy it!

Category: Sherlock, BBC
Title: Black Ice
Rating: Umm...not sure about ratings on here. Involves minor injuries and fluff, so suitable for anyone really.
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Summary: In pursuit of a murder suspect, Sherlock takes a tumble on ( Read more... )

john, sherlock holmes, sherlock, john watson, hurt/comfort, romance, fanfiction, black ice

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prettybirdy979 October 10 2010, 00:55:25 UTC
I love this story! (Which I think I've already said but I thought I would repeat myself). =D

How about you post a link for these stories to here- http://community.livejournal.com/sherlockbbc/
It has heaps of Sherlock stories (and icons and fan art)

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elvendork_lee October 10 2010, 06:36:43 UTC
Thank you, go ahead and repeat yourself, it's great to hear!

Cool, I'll go have a look now!

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frith_in_thorns October 16 2010, 19:43:59 UTC
Lovely! There's nothing better than h/c and adorable John/Sherlock in the same story :) And Sherlock finding it 'interesting' made me laugh :)

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elvendork_lee October 16 2010, 19:46:28 UTC
I agree. :) Thank you, and so pleased that you liked it.

Possible sequel in the making too, if you're interested, so watch this space, so to speak. :)

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Re: Black Ice disassembly_rsn September 3 2011, 23:35:08 UTC
SHERLOCK. You're calling *doctors* idiots when you went after a suspect like that? Lestrade was *right there* - presumably *he* has the sense to call in some backup rather than depending on being able to race on foot over bad terrain. (And of course he *would* do it.)

Bad Sherlock. No biscuit.

John went very easy on Sherlock in just saying that Lestrade didn't need him to finish the chase, and not bawling him out rather more thoroughly...

I agree - the mundane nature of the accident that brought Sherlock low does seem typical of the man, that he'd have an ordinary Achilles heel like that. :)

You said something about a sequel? :)

Minor nitpicks:
the detective simple swipes at it

I believe you meant 'simply'.

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Re: Black Ice elvendork_lee September 4 2011, 07:01:54 UTC
Thanks ever so much for the comment, it was my first time writing anything like this so it's a relief to know it didn't turn out completely terrible.

Yes, Sherlock is an idiot, and probably deserved more of a telling off from John! But I kind of reasoned that what with the concussion, John would probably be more concerned with treating his injuries than shouting at him, at first - and then he got rather distracted, didn't he? =P

The sequel is currently in progress but I haven't posted it just yet. Probably very soon. It is called "Fire Storm" and I am on the 12th chapter - probably the last not including the epilogue, but if it stretches too long there might be another. Watch this space!

Yes, I did. I just re-read this and cringed at my typos. It also says "winching" where it should say "wincing", and knowing me there's probably more I didn't notice even though I proof read about five times before posting. I'll fix that now. Thanks! :)

By the way: love your icon - it's brilliant! XP

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Re: Black Ice disassembly_rsn September 4 2011, 07:11:08 UTC
But I kind of reasoned that what with the concussion, John would probably be more concerned with treating his injuries than shouting at him, at first - and then he got rather distracted, didn't he?

Oh yes, I get that. :) Quite right of course.

About my icon - yep, one of red_scharlach's Cabin Pressure icons. :)

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tomoewantsdolls September 13 2011, 16:36:47 UTC
ow, this is lovely *_*

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fanbot September 29 2011, 19:09:52 UTC
Love it! Very real and solid.

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