Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 24

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: It’s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 24
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 3394
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine.

AN: So this chapter starts what I would call the third and final act of this story.  There's not much here though.  More of a bridge chapter than anything.  It can't all be morning sex and angry fights though.   I can't tell you

Comments

[x_avecia_x]

This chapter has got me all kinds of frustrated but not in a good kind of way! But that's not a criticism at all - the chapter was crazy good tension filled! I just wish that Jeff and Annie would damn well get over their shit by now and get on with being adults who TALK about things! Gah! :) But, I'm all for the mad tension and epic romantic entanglements so bring it. The fact I'm getting so involved in the characters tells me how hard you've worked to create the simmering chemistry between them. There is a fine line between love and hate and I can see it here.

Awesome chapter!

P.S. What in the hell was Sergio up to (dammit Annie, finish your conversations!)

[elsiesnuffin]

I promise that Jeff and Annie might maybe talk at some point in the future. Good?

Thank you so much for reading!

Re:P.S. The Sergio/Camilla/Rich/Pierce thing will become clearer soon, I promise.

[x_avecia_x]

I hope my comment didn't come off as criticism, it really was meant to be a compliment although I can see it could be read as a compli-sult. My bad. I truly did enjoy the chapter!

If I'm allowed to have a guess, I reckon that Camilla was Pierce's eyes in Italy. She created the party as a test for Jeff to see if he could keep it in his pants and created a diversion when it looked like he couldn't. I reckon Sergio was in on it, Rich found out, wasn't happy as he's a Jeff/Annie shipper and had went to tell Annie what was going on. I could be totally wrong though...

Thanks for giving us this masterpiece!

[elsiesnuffin]

I definitely didn't take the comment as criticism. I love nothing more than frustrating people. Seriously. I know it was a compliment.

If you're going to get that close, then you're not allowed to guess, no. ;)

[x_avecia_x]

I think my icon here says it all :)