Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 10

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: It‘s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 10
Spoilers: Through Season 2
Word Count: 1758
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon owns all of this.

AN: Insert something vaguely witty and self-effacing here.

Comments

[supercapo]

Well dang it. I was hoping you'd have some more insane twists or super angst or heavy flirting from one of Annie's potential suitors so I could just give a nice review and show you just exactly how maturely I could handle it. (seeing how things kind of got out of hand when I reviewed the last chapter

[elsiesnuffin]

We agreed no more brain talk I thought. Your rule...

I'm so glad you like (or could at least stomach) Rich. He's such a polarizing character that I don't want to overexpose him to people, but like you said, it might be fine because you don't view him as a threat.

This chapter really was more or less just setting up for future stuff happening, so nothing very exciting and nothing for you to throw a tantrum over. I am sorry about that as I was so looking forward to stopping another comment battle. But I promise there will be a more potent cliffhanger in the next chapter.

Thank you so much for reading!

[midtega]

Well I'm going to be nice and not predict from what I gather from this chapter. Interesting to see annie wondering about jeff from her conversations with rich and abed. She has barely scratch the surface of which jeff has done to torment himself with the annie of it all. If only jeff accepted it, but then again change does not happen over time. Its a process, but I think the end result will be worth it. Its my life motto. Once again your right about the fandom, when the season was over, I thought there would be a dip in j/a partcipation. I've never been happy to be proven wrong. Elsiesnuffin, supercapo, carly and the rest keep doing what u do. Write great j/a stories

[elsiesnuffin]

I can't even keep up with all the stories that have been posted AND write my own things. It seems kind of unfair really. So much going on at the comm, which is awesome!

You can predict all you want on this buddy, but like I said last time, I wouldn't bet any money on anything. Jeff is severely screwed up about some things and since I have the time, I am actually going to do some digging and exploring into why Jeff has been making things so hard on himself with regards to Annie. This chapter marks the 28% completion of this fic (I think), so there is still plenty of time for you to guess what is gonna happen!

Thanks for reading!

[stephanierb]

So close. SO CLOSE. Annie was so close to learning Jeff was at the airport. I can't help but wonder how she'd react.

I must admit to being surprised there wasn't more Camilla. I thought for sure we would see her here since she's made Annie her new "project". I'm very intrigued by that idea, so I hope we do see that in future chapters.

And of course, now that the Rich cat is out of the bag, I can't wait to find out if Abed spills the beans to Jeff, and if in turn, Rich explains to Annie his concerns about Jeff finding out.

I'm really enjoying how you're building this story. I like that you're making Jeff and Annie earn it, it will make the resolution that much more satisfying. Of course, I'm impatient for more of it, for all of it, but I'm enjoying the ride. Great work.

[elsiesnuffin]

I know for a lot of people, when they said 'We want a Jeff Annie epic like last summer!', they meant they wanted a supercute romp through Rome, but that's not necessarily my style, so I'm happy there are people like you who appreciate what I'm trying to do here. It seems like such a great opportunity to see how they operate separately vs together.

Camilla will be back, I promise. It was just such a short scene and as much as I find her creepy interest in Annie entertaining, I couldn't really justify having her just hanging around the house all the time. But she and her gross husband will be back. They have to be, Annie promised to film them for Abed!

Thank you for reading!

[khan81]

ABED!!!!!!!!! Annie was so close to finding out that Jeff had been at the airport and then he hangs up!!!!!!!!!! *face palm*
Okay....deep breaths....
So, I enjoy that little by little you are reveling information in regards to Jeff and Rich's relationship. I look forward to Annie's reaction.
I also like that Abed knows that Rich is there in Italy with Annie. I'm hoping he hung up on Annie b/c Jeff was on the other end and let's it slip...that would make up for him hanging up on Annie.
I look forward to the next chapter.

[elsiesnuffin]

Oh that Abed. Creating tension everywhere as if he thinks it is a movie...

Yeah, there are a lot of balls in the air here in regards to who knows what about whom. When I'm done with this whole thing, I will have to take a picture of the chart I've made for myself to keep it all straight and post it.

Thanks for reading!

[heartjd]

(yay, I come back from work and I see there's an update!!)

ABED! HOW RUDE!

But at least the word that Rich is there is out... :D

Poor Jeff... mid-life crisis, eh? I know the perfect prescription for that (hint: it's NOT more cowbell).

[elsiesnuffin]

Well no, he doesn't have a fever :).

I'm so glad updates make you happy! Do you like being surprised or do you want to know when the next one is?

Thank you for reading!